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Thanks for the update and i'm still enjoying the story. Just keep up the good work and don't give up on theis story because i really want to see how it ends.

{{{*SIGH*}}} Yes, I'm pouting over the shortness of last chr. Br. But, I'm SOOOOO... happy aff has come out of it's coma. Twice I tried to leave reviews on mm, but they didn't post :::*raspberry*:::!!! As for spelling I only caught one mispelled. HEH, HEH, but that pales to your style, but have you noticed the paragraphs are broken up differently than when you started "Kagome Where are You?". Anyways...MORE sensei jeffs, MORE!!!

Jeffs, I just have to comment on "lady" fluffy's review. I understand what she's attempting to "comunicate". There is room for you to put in more emotional descriptives, BUT that's what my imagination is for if needed, maybe because she's so young she's lacking, or doesn't know how to enjoy just getting to know the other person and goes straight for the sex when on the first date. I remember "when I was young" reading about a dozen Harlequin Romance books, it didn't take long to go numb. VARIETY!...what's sweet if there\o soo sour or salt? Doesn't laughter feel better after tears? She brought up boring, what if her house were done in the color tones of only one color? So your better at history (I like history the older I get, so I'm jealous, even just to have a memory that would remember like yours) anyways...so your better at history, but so was "Gone With The Wind", the character's relationships were pathetic and disfuctional which, to me, made it more angst than romance. But people still revere it! You come across as a strong person, I believe you will pick what you want from it and move ahead. GO jeffs GO!

EVIIIIIILLLLLLL u r a bad girl lol OMG i cant wait till the next chappy is up . wooooohooooooooo

Ah, finally adultfanfiction is back and so is one of my favorite stories. Bravo! Glad to see it updating again. Good work, Jeff. I like how you do some actual research when you decide to add different elements to your stories.
Ignore LadyFluffy...it seems that some people had rather read bad porn/rape/snuff fiction than something that actualy has a plot and decent characterization.

Well, it is certainly about time that I review. I starreadreading during "Kagome, Where are you?," and picked up on some of your other past stories for further background of the world you have sculpted around these characters. Your writing is very distinctive, the detail and planning you put into a story goes beyond your typical fanfiction. While, I think there are times you sacrifice pacing in favor of explaination, it is also refreshing to see the lengths to which you think out each situation. It makes the story all the more believable, even as the circumstances grow more fantastic. I have enjoyed the originality of this storyline, and I look forward to the remainder of this particular story arch.

Perfect as always, but...CURSE YOU FOR THE CLIFFY!!!!!!! now that that is off my chest, i really hope that when you do update the chapters are as wonderful as the rest of the HUGE fic this has become. don't ever lose that ability, it suits you so well.

agh! how could you?! *sobs* your stop with that cliffhanger than you say you wont update it for a while?! your cruel

No... You deserve a break for all you're work, but I hope that you'll update soon.

Three words. You. Are. Evil. That's all I'm going to say.