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for Kagome's Return

by jeffshelton

person Anon
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought you said it was going to be an sessomaru and kagome flick not all three
person Kayla
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Jeff you are definitely the best writer on AFF. Keep them coming!
person maria
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
why in this chapter sesshomaru eat human food?
is it in 'kagome where are you?' you wrote that if dog eat food from human who feed it, they will follow them?
so, as a taiyokai he not suppose to eat food from kagome.

t rit right??????
tell me if i wrong.
person mofaf
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great chap....think Kag is gonna have to make Inu feel like he is the greatest when they get in bed....lol.
person Mitsuko
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If i remember correctly, you've said before that the world created by Go-shin-boku-kami is a dimension like the ones Kagome and Sesshoumaru traveled through. So it's not really the past of Kagome's wrold, therefore changing InuYasha's world will not affect Kagome's world. Please explahis his because I am greatly confused.
person Tory
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So ive been following the story kagome where are u?! since the very begining, ando reo really like the sequal, but this one seems to lack the same style as the last one. Its as if u get to wrapped up in trying to explain about the past and how families used to get eachother off and what not. Its compleastly not logical for someone in this time to EVER claim that they even thought of breastfeeding their son at age 12 or w/e to be closer to him! Its just not done and some of the other things mrs. Higurashi was saying were just not plausible. The flow of this story is just different and i dont like it that much, but who knows after reading kagome where are u?! its obvious your a talented writer so maybe it will change into something spectacular.
person grrrrrr
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok i have to agree with Lady Fluff on a lot of things, this whole sequal SUCKSSSSSSSS where is the magic from the first o Wai Wait, i guess im a little off because only about 3/4 of kagome where are u was absolutly amazing, then all the sudden after u hit that orgy world everyting goes down. I mean its just not likely they would ever agree to share her and the whole way u handle this story makes me want to scream!!!!!!!!!!!! I fell in love with ur first one and would eagarly wait for an update but ur butchering the story! Kagome just came out of character and u use all the past bullshit which no1 really wants to know about and is irrelivent to the story anyway! In kagome where are u i was expecting a nice happy ending with her and sess but then u throw in this bullshit where he cant amrry her and has other wives and owuldnt leave them for her, i was waiting for u to pull it together and have sess tell her that hves ves her more than that and marry her and have the happy ending but NOOOOOO u come up with this crap about sharing her and her accepting that she cant marry him, let me tell u , u can never TRUELY care for the 2 lovers in your life the same, there will always be one in ur herat that u cant live without, god help us, this crap u pulled out of ur ass makes me want to re write some of ur chapters, scrathch that, makes me want to re write ur last few chapters of kagome where are u and just compleastly erase this story, if u can even call it that!
person inuyasha_n_kagome_rox142
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey,

Not bad.

If I remember correctly, somewhere in Kagome! Where are You there was a part where Sesshoumaru wondered if Kagome could heal her virginity. Will that be happening anytime soon?

Also, I reviewed A Shard on FF.Net, and was wondering if you got it as my internet was screwing up.
person Mayukagurl
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really great story! I hope you make more really soon, and really really long!!
person Fanficaddict
schedule August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice update and i'm sad to see this story end. i just hope that the story with sess's mother is resolved.