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Well...I've seen better

Oh, why do you have to do that? I mean its not a cliffy but still! Update soon please!

OMG, what gonna happen to Sango? You have to update a soon as u can. Hopefull after Sango gets better there will be more lemons scenes too!

nice....i love lemons! omigosh, nice twist to it...making sango pregnant and all. she didn't seem like the innocent type at all in this fanfiction, but eh who cares? you did a nice job! IT HAS MY FAVORITE PAIRINGS IN IT! UPDATE SOON!

Sooooo lemony! I luv it! update ASAP!!!!! This fanfic rocks!

YaY! I love the story so far! Hmmm.... That dosnt sound right does it. " So far" You know what? We need to change it. ANd you can! Update your story and then it will be "I love the story! Its so great and wounderful and .... (and more praises of aproval and graditude) " So please please update. Or my head might explode! (it will too)

O___O OMG OMG OMG I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!!! So full of lemon and smut and I love, love, love, love, LOVE mirokuXsango!!! *-* you're such an AWESOME lemon writer!! I'm going to use you as reference for a few of my fics, if you don't mind :D (Its a bad habit of mine to constructively criticize, so here goes) ONLY thing wrong was 1 or 2 spelling errors and the characters were OOC ("Out of character", as in: Miroku and Sango wouldnt act that way, well, you didnt add background as to why they finally admitted the truth and got to doing the fun stuff!) Other than that you're fic was BEAUTIFUL! I love the descriptive stuff >D I wish I could write as good as you *-*

PS: Read my fics, please? See what I should do to improve!

PSS: I'll read/review the other chapters when I have time. I g2g right now though, sorry ^_^;;

Excellent story. I'm so happy for Miroku and Sango, especially now that Sango is pregnant. I cannot wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon.