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June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. Inu is rarely humble and it is a refreshing change. I really liked the AN in the beginning. What you said is very true and easily forgotten.
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June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY like your story. You are so right that it takes more than just having material things to make a relationship work. A lot of couples brake up because they don't get the emotional support they need. I like that you have Inu & Kag realizing that they have a problem and so being comitted to each other that they are working it out. Many couples don't do that, they just head straight for the divorce lawyer.
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June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was great for a firstie! I liked it a l..I ..I find it hard to believe that Inuyasha has a romantic bone in his body. But then again, this story is in an AU, so it doesn't really count. Good job! You seem so mature that I think you're the only person that's actually over 18 in this section, lol...XD
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June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! I cant wait for the next chapter this one made me cry. ^_^
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June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey there..this is my 2nd attempt at reviewing..argh the server gets so picky sometimes :)
You have an interesting beginning since Inu and Kag are already married and have obviously been experiencing problems like any normal couple - how do you define being a good spouse -is it by the material things you can provide or the intangibles that make your partner feel special and loved?
It's nice that has has an epiphany about the way he's been treating Kag but wow -he certainly did NOT let her have any say during that phone call! I mean, she wanted to talk to him and he just poured forth with his own emotions not giving her any time to react.
I hope that yourt cht chapter is one where they can actually COmmunicate :) And of course make up - they so obviously love each other...and they should reconcile. (Inu-Kag should always be together in my book....)
:)
You have an interesting beginning since Inu and Kag are already married and have obviously been experiencing problems like any normal couple - how do you define being a good spouse -is it by the material things you can provide or the intangibles that make your partner feel special and loved?
It's nice that has has an epiphany about the way he's been treating Kag but wow -he certainly did NOT let her have any say during that phone call! I mean, she wanted to talk to him and he just poured forth with his own emotions not giving her any time to react.
I hope that yourt cht chapter is one where they can actually COmmunicate :) And of course make up - they so obviously love each other...and they should reconcile. (Inu-Kag should always be together in my book....)
:)
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June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my sweet Lord! You did it! An Inu fic! I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw the story and your name! So, it's a review and I must say some things:
1. Yes, they are VERY OOC. But the thing is... I REALLY like it. They are not a teen couple living at ancient Japan fighting demons to find pieces of a jewel. They are a married couple living together for some years and having real problems, just like real people. I was thinking about that yesterday after reading a fic about Inu being an ass an torturing Kagome because he was pissed after having his "possession" threatened. I can understanding a possessive half dog who thinks about people like his pack members and Kagome like his mate. I can bear a male character who lives in feudal Japan and thinks about a woman like a possession. But I just CAN'T bear people writing about a modern man who treats his woman, who he is suppose to love, like a piece of meat. He doesn't think twice before punish the girl he says he love using samesame girl like some sexual toy. It's disgusting! Your story is about a man who did mistakes and after realizing that is suffering because he is punishing HIMSELF to make his woman happy. It's reality and I love it! I wished all man could be like that!
2. You WILL read criticism but bear with that. Many people are not mature enough to see things like they really are.
3. I can't wait to read the next one!!!!! I hope to read some juicy lemon.. hentai lere!!!!!
Big hugs from your number one fan and good luck!
Lere
1. Yes, they are VERY OOC. But the thing is... I REALLY like it. They are not a teen couple living at ancient Japan fighting demons to find pieces of a jewel. They are a married couple living together for some years and having real problems, just like real people. I was thinking about that yesterday after reading a fic about Inu being an ass an torturing Kagome because he was pissed after having his "possession" threatened. I can understanding a possessive half dog who thinks about people like his pack members and Kagome like his mate. I can bear a male character who lives in feudal Japan and thinks about a woman like a possession. But I just CAN'T bear people writing about a modern man who treats his woman, who he is suppose to love, like a piece of meat. He doesn't think twice before punish the girl he says he love using samesame girl like some sexual toy. It's disgusting! Your story is about a man who did mistakes and after realizing that is suffering because he is punishing HIMSELF to make his woman happy. It's reality and I love it! I wished all man could be like that!
2. You WILL read criticism but bear with that. Many people are not mature enough to see things like they really are.
3. I can't wait to read the next one!!!!! I hope to read some juicy lemon.. hentai lere!!!!!
Big hugs from your number one fan and good luck!
Lere
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June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow...inu is a freakin' moron! let her get a word in edgewise stupid! she obviously wanted to say aomething, let her say it! he was a bit OOC but i think you got their relationship down pat. goo job
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June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME...LOVED IT...You really nailed Kag/Inu's relationship and did an excellent job of defining it and corresponding it to the PRESENT values/lifestyles versus their FEUDAL relationship. Sincerely hope chap 2 is just around the corner (puts on puppy dog face)