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I not only thought that your fic was well written as usual, but that also your writing style portrays the feelings of the characters very well. Your attention to detail when describing the setting always adds to the visual mental image that seems to bring your storys to life. Another one of my favorite atributes of your writing is the way your fics are always tied to such strong plots, really drawing the reader into what you are trying to convey. Your fics also move fluidly and at a rather upbeat pace that keep me interested the entire time, even when there is a sceen about a character's thoughts and feelings. I enjoyed this fic alot, but I think that "The Black Hawke" really shows your true potential as a writer and is by far my favorite fic in that entire catagory. I sincerly hope that your keep going with that one especially, because I can't wait for the next chapter!

i know i already reviewed this once but lord its just so great! mature and sensible with normal realistic romance adn thats the best kind. such a great job!!

Wow. That was such a wonderfully written fic. I loved how you showed that a marriage can get better if both sides put some effort into it. Maybe then so many couples wouldn't divorce so quickly. Great fic, I loved it tons. Keep up the great work. :)

MOU, Tsuki-sama!!! I was just cruising around, decided to go totally OCC and read a little inu, was I surprised ANGST is not the word for this chapter, it nearly brought me to tears, dont know if i can read chapt two without the kleenex....

Tsuki-sama:

Yes I went ahead red read the second chapter, you know I would; do I detect something personal in this story? Something that might have happened? It was very good.. Arigatou for sharing... much love

::wah::!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was beautiful! oh, i love love! ::sniff:: i actually have tears in my eyes (not sure if its from the story or because i liked the fic so much that i didn't blink) either or, it was a wonderful fic! BRAVO!!!

This is a really, really good story and I hope there is still more to come!

Wow what an honest protrayl of marriage. It is as you said. It is hard work. But if you keep at and let them know you love them and care about them then it all works out and is h alh all the hard troubles. Marriage is like a career it is a job but it is also what you want to do in life. It is the sweet joy and the sour sadness. But even though the good is few and far between it is made up by the quality of it. And no I am not married. But Marriage is like life. Nothing worthwhile is given you have to earn it.

That was the most sweet lemon you ever wrote! But I can believe that ended alread! Please, I want to know about the baby and if they will reabe abe able to keep their promises! Congratulations sensei, they wasn't too OCC in that chapter. Your touch is better now.

Big hugs from your number one fan!

Lere

Nicely done. Inu is rarely humble and it is a refreshing change. I really liked the AN in the beginning. What you said is very true and easily forgetten.