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for Tightly Strung

by Sullivan

person Numisma
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lazy me finally read chapter 2. liked it quite much. Naraku rocksil gil grin*update soon, biyatch ;)
person drake220
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! you updated! i loved the inu/naraku thing. it was great! they do look to be a great amount of fun! update asap!
person Shiro Ryu
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OK, you have caught my interest.
I look forward to reading more!
person akuma_river
schedule June 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like I really really like. So naraku is Inu's lap dog, huh. Interesting. That is a comedic duo waiting to happen. Love the story Keep up the good work. So is god his dad? And is the dad Sesshoumaru or Inutashiou?
person helenium
schedule June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I think you're doing great so far. Very original. It's amazing where inspiration comes from. Please do continue. I can't wait to see how this story develops, what kind of story it'll be.
person szmadad
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow...your writing is just amazing. ie hoe how descriptive you are in setting up the scenes and characters! and i must say that while i'm not into the genre, i love the fiddlin' music in "Devil Went Down to Georgia."

i too am curious, are you intending there to be any romance between Inu-Kag? if he's the devil (as in Lucifer his bad self) and not just a demon or half demon...i wonder how that would play out...

hmm...i'm interested in where you'll head with this next :)

person ThatsMsDiva2U
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start. I cannot wait to read more.
person No One Knows
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY FREAKING GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is AWESOME!!!! I can't wait to see more!
person Angela
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very good so far...if you add a new chapter i'll be sure to read it... well, til the next review...keep up the good work...
person Lady Sethia
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy hell!! I mean... wow!! I'm not one to read AU fics, but damn that was... wow... Very very very very very interested in reading the rest. Please post soon.


Lady Sethia