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for Tightly Strung

by Sullivan

person Miss_Marilyn69
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Been a year... I guess this was proably abbandonded which is a shame really... The story grabbed me right up front. It makes me sad to think that it will be just one more wonderful story left unfinished and forgotten. Muses please find it in you devine graces to grant this author some inspiration for this story.
person Bibsta
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All i have to say is wow.. this peice of writing is amazing. im enthralled already. Im just waiting to see when Inu and Kags meet up. 100000000000000000/10
person Sayanna The Rover
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::Shippou eyes:: ...No update? Man, right when I was starting to get addicted, too....::pouts in a corner::......despite A/U, I think you've managed to keep everyone safe from too much OOCness ^_^ Needless to say, on that account, I LIKE ~_~ Update REALLY soon, ne?!!! i'm itching for another beautiful batch of words strung up by your keyboard!!! (otherwise, be prepared to recieve anonymous hate mail.....lol)
person Serena
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, love your story so far!!! no worries--the flashbacks weren't 'a mess' as your a/n fretted......i really like the plot for your story!! I mean, it's so original, and the depictions are crisp and positively delectable ^_^ please update, asap!!! I'm addicted already--and just out of curiousity, could the greater force for good, so to speak (Inu's father, erego, god) be planning on kagome's and inu's encounter--that she purifiys the jewel with her spirit, which absorbes souls, so to speak?....hmmm....wonder if our 'dark doggy lord' has other interests in mind aside for her....everlasting life? lol sorry...moment....yup, update soon!!!
person alex
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love the story but need to ask when you shall update. this story is diffrent then the others making it better so as I ask one more time please update soon i shall ask no more as of now.
person drake220
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you updated for real! hurray! i liked this chapter, the memory was very sweet but realistic. good job!! adn inu was wonderful!
person Zipper Tantrum
schedule August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
There isn't anything written...?
person Venatus_Fraus
schedule August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, evidently, Chapter three is stage shy, or something. I tried to delete it and upload the file as well as cutting and pasting the text. I can't imagine why it is doing this but I really apologize.
person Jessie
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more more more
person OfAnvils
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
update pleasE? for the little bunny stuck in the tree? for the coughdrop loged in my throat? pretty please?