rate_review Reviews

Well, LotFW was awesome back in June 2004, it still is awesome, and it's going to be awesome forever more. Zelix for the win!

this is very well written

i just finished it...phew! what a chapter! (meant in a good way, lolz)...i absolutesly loved it! i think somewhere in the middle of reading it i thought 'wow, this guy is so intuned to emotions, and the sex...holy shit!...he probably has a girl for every day of the week'. sorry for that, just wanted to say it. anywayz, i loved it!! thankx

Quite interesting story, though I think it would be easier to read if you broke it up into chapters. Nice description, and just enough details to create a visualization without taking away from the story. Kagura as a writer, huh? I don't I've ever seen that before. Her relationship with Arc is unique, though. I always imagined Kagura as fiercely independent, though you showed a softer side of her. Good job, would you consider a story with Kagura and some other pairing, perhaps?

BRILIANT, ABSOLUTLY FUCKING BRILIANT....I TOTALY LOVED THIS STORY, IT MADE ME LAUGH, IT MADE ME CRY...I HAVEN'T HAD A STORY LIKE THIS AFECT ME LIKE THIS SINCE I READ LORD OF THE RINGS...THIS IS TRUELY AN EPIC STORY, AND IT SHOWS THAT YOU HAVE GRATE POTENIAL TO BECOME AN EVEN GRATER WRITER IN THE FUTUER....SO WITH OUT FURTHER ADO, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.. AND I TRUELY HOPE THAT YOU KEEP WRITEING THESE AWSOME STORIES....OOH P.S. I HAVEN'T BEEN ABLE TO FIND THE SECOND PART TO THIS STORY, SO I HAVEN'T BEEN ABLE TO READ IT YET....ANYHOO KEEP WRITEING O.K.

Wow, I'm surprised, I never thought that Arc would be Kagome and Inuyasha's kid. I always thought Kagura would be someone of Inuyasha's generation, though I suppose it would make sense if you counted the actual years. Interesting story. Nicely done, though maybe you could break it into a couple of chapters. I personally thought that sucha long chapter might a little intimidating to some readers.

HOLY FREAKING GOD.


*Blubbering of incoherant praise.*


MOTHER FUCKER.

Awesome.

Hey Zelix. I loved this story. The relationship betwee3n Kagura and Arc is amazing, and of course, I love Arc as a character. He's is definitely the coolest OC ever. Woot. i especially like the way you escribe the whole soulmates thing, because it's awesome...and incredibly romantic. Thank for writing this, and continuing it with TSE, because that story isw amazing too. Keep writing! Woot!

SOOOO LONG BUT IT WAS WORTH IT SATISFACTION AT LAST FREE AT LAST FREE AT LAST OH LORD I AM FREE AT LAST!!!!! Hippy-THE SMOOTH GROOVE OF THE WIND YES RIGHTEOUS POWER MAN Commi-BLOODY WOOT HELL YEAH ME LOVS IT!!!

Wow!! That was good and it was very fun to read. As I read I thought that Arc was Sesshoumaru's son so I was very surprized when you said he was Inuyasha's son. Keep writing. Signed a fan of Kargura