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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. ....just...wow...
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooh that was good you have got to update this soon Im going nuts, what happens next??? and how could ya leave it at a cliffy?? sniffles..lol great work hope to see an update soon I know ya might not be able to but ifn ya will would ya email me if ya update this fic??? ty much if not will look back for more till then be safe well and happy much smiles and huggles Mija...:-)
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November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man, you left us with a cliffhanger, and I'm already burning a hole in my seat...lol...but that was hot, though. It was one of the best stories I've read here, and it was very original. Fantastic job, please update soon.
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November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice start including the lemon...but you need to slow down. Though that lemon was very good....its not quite steamy enough..though yes i was a bit turned out..but you should at least slow it down and give MORE detail. Also can you seperate them in paragraph? But as i said....very very nice start indeed it sure give me a hook..i hope it continuess! =DD
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November 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it alot. It is very well written and I can see it happening quite clearly. ^_^ Good work, are you continuing the story, or is that it?
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June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey this is good write more soon plz :)
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May 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW....i hope it's not finished yet...that was pretty intense....not bad...i liked it
JuneBug
JuneBug
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February 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Can you please break the story into paragraphs? It makes reading easier.
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February 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
a good start to a great fanfic keep up the good work