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for Make Me Love You

by rah10381

person scorpotter
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like this very much b'coz I love Miroku n Sango
please make more fanfic for them
person Jennifer
schedule April 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
PANT.PANT.PANT.ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.MY TAIL IS WAGGING THAT MEANS IM HAPPY.YO LOOK I GOTTA GO TAKE A SHOWER. MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM HMMMMMM. dAMN THAT WAS ONE GOOD STORY. ARIGOTO.PEACE.
person Nana
schedule April 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Am dropping a note to say I really like the points you've made regarding Sango's POV of her relationship with Miroku. The fic was really sweet and well done! Keep writing!^^
person Elf From Space
schedule February 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice! But ouch, I bet Sango really was sore in the morning! I'm also so glad to see a lemon in which the author doesn't assume Miroku's got all sorts of experience. He is soooo a virgin, just the perverted kind who likes to pretend he's so confident. Almost too much introspective angst at the begginning for my tastes, but then again I'm the sort who whenever I try to write anything it turns so silly that even my lemons are more like a big joke than anything serious ^_^ I really liked it once it got moving too. Hehe Miroku's not to be held responsible in the morning. I bet she stilapslaps him.