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for Feeling dirty

by Atropa

person Mai-Rakychan
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, thisry iry is awesome! ^____^ hurry writing it!
person Niki
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
Wow your story so far is awsome! You really are a good writer. My fave couple is Inuyasha and Sango. I think they should get together. Kagome needs to get with Hojo and Miroku find himself a new girl. But Kagome and Inuyasha are ment to be. So are Miroku and Sango. Oh well.

Love Always,
Niki
person Truitt
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This such a sweet and refreshing story. Good work.
person Zelix
schedule June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heh, mushy mushroon... good one, and yes, i will have to go the dentist after this one. :)
person snowfall
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very cute! I look forward to moree.
person psycho
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
umm i just wanted to let you know that when you have dialouge you must use quotation marks. it makes it easier to seperate dialouge from story background.
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Of all the Iu/San pairings, this one is by far the best I have read.
There are very few alt pairings fics that respects the behavior of all the characters, well exept for Sesh.

Maybe you could explain Seshomaru's behaviour with the fact that Inu ha avenged their father's death by killing his mortal ennemy

keep the good work coming
person Kit-chan
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
argh! my first review didnt snd successfully because this stupid site blanked out again!

but anyways

I LOOOVE how i can always trust you to have something for me to read everyday because you update so fast. i LOOOVE your sango/inuyasha fics and as usual i love this fic too! there arnt enough sango/inuyasha fics out there and i'm soo glad u like that couple too!

I totally worship ur fics!!
person Wolf Gothicka
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Tis great! *wonders about Sessy's sudden appearence though* ..........where'd he come from?
*shrugs* oh well. *runs after sessy* hey! wait up! ^_^
person Sango
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is great so far! I can't wait to read the rest of it! Keep up the good work!!!!