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by inuyashasgirl

person FoxyOrange
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.....I say.....I like it! Its very sexy with the lil' yuri session there and then the lemons! Hehe... So, please continue! Good story plot, too! Kudos!

FoxyOrange
person hrc
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey good chapy but i think that kagome wouldnt be so willing so cheat on inuyasha with kikyou i dont no if you get what im saying or not but it just made her seem alittle more slutty then she's made out to be and i think that it sorta makes the story a big joke because at first you make this couple that love each other ok thats finey gey go to collage still fine her teacher makes a move on her, not unheard of, she accepts the advance for a grade ok alittle out there but still it could happen, she sleeps with her teacher for a grade, thats happend before, her teacher becomes a little obsessov (sp) and wants more ok that can happen sure, he makes deals with her in extange for sex and she agrees way more then once, see that there is where it starts to become a little unbelivable then they have a threesome with another one of his students yeah ok that can happen to,but when you started to have her go to kikyou's house so much or actually at all was were this story lost a lot os its standing and become more of a joke, and then she starts to become more of a slut. ok now i dont want you to think that this is a flame even through its coming off like that because its not really i think its a good story with a good plot line but i just think that you come off track and made this story out to sound like to me a badly writen porno even through i dont think that was intentional (sp) thats what it sounds like to me and some others that i know that have read this but i think that maybe you should go back and re-read ur story and see for yourself but this is a good story so dont think that its not even through your prob thinking that you dont think that already but anyways if could please respond to this review i would greatly appreciate(sp) that thank you (ifellasleep@hotmail.com), please respond
person EvilAngel69
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok about what i said before i love your story but sess really is an evil little bastard and if that were me he woulda been castrated a looooooong time ago. this is a great story please continiue!!!!
person sum1
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey ok good story but i think you went over bord on the kikyou thing and i dont tihnk kags would have been that willing to her but other then that it is a good story
person EvilAngel69
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey you cant just leave us hangin like that please add more!!!!! ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Somnambulicious
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Intersting fic. You know, blackmail can bot both ways. If I were in Kagome's place, I'd just record a conversation with Sesshoumaru and then threaten to expose him to the university and the media. He'd never work again. Then again, that whole threatening to kill Inuyasha thing...maybe I'd just kill the bastard.
person PrincessSweetSugar(Not Logged In)
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm so loving this story! You have to keep up the great work! This was bugging me...since Sesshoumaru didn't use a condom as well, doesn't that mean that Kagome could be pregnant with his baby? Or is it safe to assume that the baby is Inuyasha's? But since this a Sess/Kag pairing...hmm...

Wow, you have got me boggled.

Please update!
person Kai
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay first I love this fanfic! You are really good at this. But I have a question, is it really Inuyasha's kid? Because I remember Sesshomaru having unsafe sex with Kagome. If you want to tell me you can e-mail me if you don't want everyone else to know. If you don't thats fine just e-mail me please or drop me a note in the fanfic telling me its a surprise because if it would ruin the fanfic if i knew then I don't want too, know. Kay? Anyway keep up the good work!
Kai
person Kai
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I forgot I changed my address last night I'm such a baka. Sorry
Kai
person Anon
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Has that idiot ever considered the fact that it might be Sess baby she's carrying? He came inside her first the moron or did she forget about when she let Sess fuck her brains out, he wasn't wearing a condom and he came inside her. Kagome is about to get a very rude awakening from Sess. She's so stupid!!