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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love the story but could you update pretty plz!?¡¿
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
er...why did you have to lie??... and said it was a sess/kag.... sess raping and trying to kill Kagome..is not a relationship at all..
why didnt u say it was a Inu/Kag..while Kag is fucking Kikyo on the side type of relationship..??..
u let my hopes down..
why didnt u say it was a Inu/Kag..while Kag is fucking Kikyo on the side type of relationship..??..
u let my hopes down..
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January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Plz update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If the baby isnt yashs, i say you make him commit sucide when he finds out that would break kagomes heart maybe..... not because shes a slut
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January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Korn s A.D.I.D.A.S song would be a perfect song for sess
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November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAAAY INU'S STAYING WITH KAG!!!!!!! YAAAAAY!!!!!!!! whew.....that is some serious stuff.....i just hope u dun suprise us all by making sess come back form the dead or sumthin.....that would be soooooooo wrong.....anyhoo i luv this story....^_____________^
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November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Uh, wow. Where did you learn to write? This is amazing! Update again soon and keep your internet up and running ; ).
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November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am just wondering how Inuyasha was able to take being cheated on so well. I know this is a A/U but come on she cheats confess and all he sas I s I not going to leave and then she goes over and sleep with Kikyo, that is still consider cheating even if it is with the same sex and because of that your Kagome loses her creditability in my book how can she say that she loves Inuyasha but at the same time still want to sleep with somebody else.
I don't know far your going with this and maybe you will resolve this whole Kagome being a slut thing but your characters lose creditability when you put them in situations and then have them react totally unbelievably to those said situations.
Here is a example Kagome cheats on Inuyasha the love of his life but he doesn't feel betrayed, bitter, sadden, or heartbroken he just shrugs it off like it was a just a parking ticket. Sorry Doesn't Happen when you love somebody the your story protrays Inuyasha loving Kagome.
Good Luck with the rest of your story but I can't really read anymore but of your charactization.
I don't know far your going with this and maybe you will resolve this whole Kagome being a slut thing but your characters lose creditability when you put them in situations and then have them react totally unbelievably to those said situations.
Here is a example Kagome cheats on Inuyasha the love of his life but he doesn't feel betrayed, bitter, sadden, or heartbroken he just shrugs it off like it was a just a parking ticket. Sorry Doesn't Happen when you love somebody the your story protrays Inuyasha loving Kagome.
Good Luck with the rest of your story but I can't really read anymore but of your charactization.