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for Meant to be

by Piquini

person Zelix
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pretty nice fight scene if i say so myself... which brings me to a question, i have two Inuyasha fics 'Silver Winds of Passion' and 'Dark Soul of the Future, White heart of the past'... both have a action scene in the first chapters so my suggestion is that if you want, check them out and tell me if i have what it takes to write action scenes...

It is not proper to ask things like this through a review but i hope you can forgive me....
person Albus the great
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story rocks too.
person Cold Demon Lord
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the more Sango/Inuyasha lovin.
person Venus
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Miroku, I hope he lives and finds somebody to love him and give him an heir. I am also ready for more Inu/San lemons.
person Inu Chan77
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome and more awesome. I hope you update soon.
person Albino Elf
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Veey nice story you got here.
person Pixie Elf
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah such a sweet moment don't want to leave each other. I hope Miroku is okay. Yea more wonderfuls lemons coming up
person TLC
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I usually only read Inu/Kag stories but I must compliment you on your writing ability especially the lemons they were so hot, I am looking forward to more of this story.
person kit-chan
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohhh i had a nice revew for u but when i clicked the review button, the stupid site wouldnt connect as usual T-T

anyways i thought ur writing for the fight scene was just fine! ^_^ keep up the good work and i cant wait for the lemon eh heheheheh...*BLUSH*
person Venus
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the better Alt. Pairing stories I have read here and you write wonderful lemons scenes, I can't wait for more.