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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very Good and you made a very hor lemon and have an intrguing plot as well I hope you write more Inu/Kag lemons in the future it was wonderful.
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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You wrote action, sex, and have a wonderful plot. GREAT STORY!
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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice start. I think you did a wonderful job on the opening action secquence. I also thought you lemon was well written and you have a plot to boot! You Go Boy!
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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this was great! you have at least a 12 star quality on your lemons here, keep on writin my friend.
pyro
pyro
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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a great fanfic please update soon
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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is very good and i hope you will continue it. Also the words you use to start the story are good to.
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Just had to tell you that I love your fic so far. There are some spelling/grammatical errors which you might want to check in Word or something, but otherwise it's great. I love the humor. Especially in this chapter when Kouga ran in on them and.. Ah, great stuff. ANYWAY yeah. You better have 6 up soon or I may die from suspense.. I also want to know what the hell that ThInG isss.. =S <33 Lithi
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June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a great fanfic pleasssse update soon
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O may... that was good... Keep it up!! :D
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hay Hay,
I am loving your story, truley it is soo good. PLEASE PLEASE continue and post the chapters I am coming to my computer everyday and looking to see if you put up a new chap. Don't do this to me now when things start to get really good. You r doing a great job and i know you have much more up your sleaves to reveal. So please if not for them for you and for me PLEASE post the next chapter and others that you have done.
thanks -holly-
I am loving your story, truley it is soo good. PLEASE PLEASE continue and post the chapters I am coming to my computer everyday and looking to see if you put up a new chap. Don't do this to me now when things start to get really good. You r doing a great job and i know you have much more up your sleaves to reveal. So please if not for them for you and for me PLEASE post the next chapter and others that you have done.
thanks -holly-