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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg OMG this is a kick butt fanfic please update soon
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June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe how evil that was. That was soooooo evil. Anyways I love the story can't wait to see how it goes. This being even though sealed for an eternal period doesn't seem really evil. I mean yeah he has the vibes and stuff. But there seems to be something else to it. How does Koga, Inu-Yasha, and Kagome seem to feel as though they know this being? Could it be that this is Inu-Yasha in some shape or form? But that doesn't make sense. Is he the ancestor of the demons? A god? A being of chaos? So many questions, I look forward to the answers. Keep up the excellent work.
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June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I love the story. Keep up the good work. I can't wait til how this all goes.
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June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
o may... tension tension...
I really liked the part where Sango breaks down... It was so emotional, perhaps because the weather is rainy here and there is not much to do...
I really liked the part where Sango breaks down... It was so emotional, perhaps because the weather is rainy here and there is not much to do...
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June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No dont delete it, you might not be getting reviews from people but you cant delete it because of that. i have read your story well the parts you have written and i like it its a very interesting story so dont delete it. keep up the good work and cant wait to see what happens next.
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June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a great fanfic please update soon
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June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, I do have some advice Zelix.
1. You jumped between past tense and present tense a little to much especially in the Kouga, Inuyashnd Knd Kagome scene.
2. You should never post AN in the middle of stories it distract from reading your fanfiction if you insert random notes.
3. Dialogue is a must, I kin min most books dialogue is written differently.
I think you have an excellent idea and an intruging plot and plenty of writing skills. if you have any more questions feel free to email me I am trying to write my story and it has taken me almost 2 months just to plan out the first 10 chapters and t not not even typed only notes. So if you have any questions feeee.ee.
1. You jumped between past tense and present tense a little to much especially in the Kouga, Inuyashnd Knd Kagome scene.
2. You should never post AN in the middle of stories it distract from reading your fanfiction if you insert random notes.
3. Dialogue is a must, I kin min most books dialogue is written differently.
I think you have an excellent idea and an intruging plot and plenty of writing skills. if you have any more questions feel free to email me I am trying to write my story and it has taken me almost 2 months just to plan out the first 10 chapters and t not not even typed only notes. So if you have any questions feeee.ee.
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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story so far and you wrote and excellent lemon. Please contiune soon.
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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story so far and you wrote and excellent lemon. Please contiune soon.
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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great Story and what an awesome lemon I thought it wasn't that chessy. Update soon.