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your are eeevvvillllllll very very evil why why why did you stop this is great update sooon

great update soon I'll feel sorry for a woman he come across 3000 years without getting some is just wrong

This story has a good idea but quite a few problems. There area few spelling and grammar problems. The A/N in the midlle of a paragraph breaks the flow.

I am not trying to be mean, just point out a few things you may want to look after. E-mail me if you want.

Paranoid

I loved the hunt. And, your description is excellent. The way you describe their breathing, the adrenaline, was great. I loved this chapter. Off to read more. Snowfall, aka, Hanyou Slave

this is a great fanfic please update soon

Love the story line and everything. Really dramatic and romantic. Absolutely love it, sorry it's kinda at a stand still point for you, only thing I can think of is Inu Yasha's dear older brother coming into the fray to help him or rather check out the creature that is causing all of this fear and chaos. A battle between them would be as intense as the one between Inuyasha and the your villian.

Look forward to reading the next chapter as soon as you get it up. I've been so dissappointed with fanfics lately because they keep putting Inuyasha with Sango, Kagome with his older brother and mixing everything up it's nice to read a fic were it continues the love that's already there and makes it come into full bloom and yet mantains the hardships and trails that brings that pack of miss matched fighters together to form such an impressive fighting team.

Bring an oc and make him kill the bad guy (I forget his name) or just make that oc give someone like kagome or Inu a power wachamecallit

Hey there, Zelix! I just read chapter one. Great start to an epic. Very descriptive. I enjoyed the whole battle and celebration. Just loved it! Looking forward to more battles. Such a great cliffie too. I will read more sooner than later as I have got to know what happens with Kikyou. Right now, I'm working on aamy,amy, detail ridden lemon between Sango and Miroku for Kag's Blood. There is something in it just for you. Don't forget to have a look. "I'll be back" to read more and give you more reviews!

Oops. I was thinking you had reviewed Kag's Blood, but it was Sketches which I wrote under the pen name Hanyou Slave. Anywho, I didn't realize you were such a prolific writer. I'm sure I will be entertained for many hours now that I have found your stories.

omg omg omg this is a great fanfic please update soon