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Awww. I'm so sad now. Well, take a break and thanks for letting us know *pouts*. In the meantime, have a Merry Christmas/Happy Hannakah/Happy Kwaanza (what ever it is you celebrate). I really was interested in what was going to happen next! Come back soon to us!

-Jazz-

I hope you update soon. I really like this fic a lot.

Zelix, man, you are truly one of the best ever. i just love how you end each chapter with "Next time on...." like it was a v show. Totally origonal. keep it up.

Great plot you've got here boy! You write very well, though there's one thing that is annoying the hell out of me: please, PLEASE stop putting "they're" or "you're" when it should be "their" and "your"; it's not only confusing but frustrating have to read these mistakes SO many times!!! I'm not a grammar freak (actually I'm from Argentina, I speak Spanish) but enough is enough! Otherwise, your fic is awesome, the plot is interesting, the romance is wonderful and the lemon and lime are GREAT! Udpate soon!

that was a great great lemon please update soon

Well. I took your advice and i read this story and you blow my mind away once again. And the last chapter A lemon, man you stole my heart. (God of Lemons). I can't wait for the next chapter.

I'm Sesshomaru fan and I can't wait for battle between Kasaraki and him.
You are great in describing battle scenes, but there could be less pathos after the battle.
Especially Shippo could be less serious and more funny, after all he is a comical character.
In anime Shippo is not so bright, basically he is teasing Inuyasha and provoking Kagome to sit him, and he is Kagume's familiar pet/cuddle toy :)
I can believe that he has grown a little, because we have to wait indefinely to watch Naraku defeat in anime or comic...
I think that Fluffy does not despise Inu so much after third movie, because Inu gained his respect as fellow warrior in fight against those zombies and their boss.

Calm down already!! Consider this a review of the whole story up to now: Naraku's death was very fitting, he deserved everything he got! And the teamwork of the "pack" was great, good job!
Kasaraki has me wondering, you really MUST write more, I'm DYING here! NEED more info on him!!! FINALLY Kouga gave up on Kagome; who would know that it would be Shippo giving him a solution he should have thought of before?! Way to go Ship You You are a VERY EVIL person!!! Don't you think they've had enough suffering for a while?! Let Kagome and Inuyasha BE! At least allow them the peace of mind of finally belonging to one another as TRUE mates after FOUR LONG YEARS!!! And, let me say, as a Sesshou fan, I'm really looking forward to his participation in this story! THERE! Is this review long enough for you?! (just a thought, I know some people who refuse to review when authors insist so much on it. BE HAPPY, DON'T WORRY!! It's a big site but they'll get to your story soon enough! Sit tight and write the next episode SOON for those of us who are waiting anxiously!!!!!!!)
NightSky

lemonlemon lemon lemon please

ah question! When u mean the new name, does that mean that u're making another story or does it mean ur continuing this just under a different name????? OH!! I LOVE how this chapter turned out!!!! Can't wat for more! I almost forgot, LEMON! :>