rate_review Reviews

Hey, still loving the story, but i just wanted to say that you should really use spell check on your writing, or ask a friend who is good with grammar to check it over, cause it can be really distracting. Also, the "authors inserts" or random comments from you throughout the story can be a bit distracting at times, it takes you out of the imagination bubble youve been creating and takes you back to reality. Still lovin the story and waitin for some good old fashioned, "un-interrupted" (cough) Kagome/Inuyasha lovin! +o)

i think .... hmmmmm sessy-sama no never inuyasha sama will no doubt falter and for the fight sesshomaru and karisako

not karisako i mean damn i forgot his name

great update

Wow, this story is a great one =) i love the way you did the whole inu-kagome's time at home parts, i would really love to see that blowheart Sesshoumaru get wrecked by Kasaraki. (beaten, not killed. he should be alive to watch inu-yasha fight him.)

Twas a very good chapter and I hope to read the next one very soon(I know its short but I'm tired so sue me ^^) Keep up the good work!

I finally finished right now, it only took me 2 days to read this freaking thing, which was worth my time in reading it. I love how you write things in detail, its much easier to picture the events that you are describing in my head. It’s not boring detail, like in history books, but cool and kinda anticipated persay ^^. Well for the first poll, I hope that Inu Yasha and Kagome live, Shippo is too young, but if it were between him and the previous 2, I would rather him die(cruel I know but what can you do?). Miroku and Sango, I don’t think so, because they have just ‘discovered’ their love for each other, and if one dies, the other will most likely kill themselves, but you’re the author so its your decision whether or not that happens. If Sesshomaru were to die, then the good thing would be that Inu Yasha will we the ruler of the western lands, but not a full youkai(which can be overlooked) but depressing because then Rin would lose her ‘father figure’ but could get adopted by Kagome and Inu Yasha, plus the fact that Sesshomaru is indeed hot, but I can get over that. What the hell just kill Kouga, though he seems to have finally gotten his life straightened out and his tribe would be at a loss and maybe even dangerous position, but who cares, to keep all the previous alive, Kouga should be sacrificed, for all in all, it would be amusing, in a sadistic kind of way. As for the second poll... I would rather see Sesshormaru and Kasaraki fight, and once again die instead of Inu Yasha, instead of Inu Yasha fighting first. But I think inevitably it will be Sesshomaru’s fight first because he’s actually searching for Kasaraki and is too hot-headed to think that he can lose. But once again, this is just my opinion, and I am anticipating future chapters and hope to read them soon, but otherwise keep up the good work ^__^!!!

You updated!!! Yeah!!!

Poll: I have no guess in who will die, but I'd love to see a fight between Sess and Kasaraki!

I'm scared to vote...but the with Sesshou.....

To the first question I think Kouga will die.