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May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
um i read now im reviewing hope thats what you want. Its a great story i wouldnt mind a part 2 when she gives birth and everything. well i would say to add more but much to my desipointment i saw the END sigh...*sighs* to bad.....
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May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^_^ This story is turning out to be good in my books. How about in the epilouge it shows Seiya , all grown-up, visting her adoptive parents with her new mate? I'm just considering a idea here so take it into consideration.
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May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story, I'm not usually a big fan of I/S pairings, but this one is going really well. I like how Inuyasha's acting toward the baby - who wouldn't fall for him??? And I don't think it's your connection, I've been getting the "page cannot be displayed" quite a bit recently.
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May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so cute
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May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, just wanted to give a friendly criticism. I love the story so far, except, your title kind of threw me.
You have it as "Sango's New Roll"
The way you have roll spelled, it means like a dinner roll, or to roll on the ground.
I think what you are going for is role, like role model, or role in life.
:)
You have it as "Sango's New Roll"
The way you have roll spelled, it means like a dinner roll, or to roll on the ground.
I think what you are going for is role, like role model, or role in life.
:)
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May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Anytime :) I had remembered reading in one of your other stories that English was not your first language, so I won't hold it against you ~_0
Glad I could help!
Glad I could help!
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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sess or Koga.
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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Atropa! I think that it should be Sesshoumaru! He could have found it on his land and left it for Sango to find. You could also use that as an opener to a Sess/Sango relationship. By the way, good fic so far! Keep up the good work!
ChromiumBlue
ChromiumBlue
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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting start can't wait for more. And I know it is to late to vote but please let it be Sesshoumaru.
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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
interesting, don't mind Inu/sango, but only if there not lovers, but it's your story and a good one so far