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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please write back soon. It is very well writen
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please continue Punishment. It's interesting.
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September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it was rreally good!!!!!!!! please mae another chapter!!!!
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July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a great fanfic please update soon
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May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm such a dirty masochist for enjoying that so much. Can't wait for an update.
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May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i ..like it..it iwas very well written but ....i donnow..mabe i am just so used to him being OOC that i forgot that he was OOC. but it was very well written. so i guess u get cudoos
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May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story, but wish Sesshomaru could have been a little nicer and was in love with Rin. Will Sess eventually fall in love with Rin? Will the child be hanyou or full demon? You should pay Sesshomaru back akinaking the child full demon and turning Rin into a inuyoukai too with Sesshomaru's features too. You know crescent moon, the two stripes, long silver white
hair, posion claws you know the works. Now that would be a good payback for Sesshomaru don't you think?
hair, posion claws you know the works. Now that would be a good payback for Sesshomaru don't you think?
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May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i hope you will either continue on with this story, and hopefully have sesshoumaru and rin fall in love with each other, or create a sequel. i liked how this story was written very much. maybe a happy ending for the rest of the story or in the sequel would be good. this story keeps people wondering what will happen next. good job! i hope to hear more from you.
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May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was intense! What happens next? Please update!
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May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was evil.
really evil.
will it go on?
migi
really evil.
will it go on?
migi