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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! There needs to be more Miro/San kinky bondage smut around. *nodnod* Definitely! Write more of it :D
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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh... And for Anon: My bra easily comes off in such situations. It's all about detachable bra straps, baby.
Although last week one of them came undone when I didn't mean for it too. That was a little awkward... Oops.
Although last week one of them came undone when I didn't mean for it too. That was a little awkward... Oops.
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September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*clear throat* no comment.................just.........uhhhhh.................write more!!
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July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fanfic! and very funny as well! I love mirokusingsinging! lol
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May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You really need to pay attention to what you are writing and posting.
First of all, chapter two is posted twice, once as chapter two and again
as chapter three.
Second, you have Sango handcuffed, then tied but Miroku manages, but some
miracle to get her bra off and throw it across the room. Think about it. Physically
impossible.
Third, don't post those little comments in ( ) in the middle of the paragraph. Very
annoying. You have something to say, do it at the beginning or end of the chapter.
A beta reader would help catch one of these mistakes. The posting mistake is your
responsibility.
First of all, chapter two is posted twice, once as chapter two and again
as chapter three.
Second, you have Sango handcuffed, then tied but Miroku manages, but some
miracle to get her bra off and throw it across the room. Think about it. Physically
impossible.
Third, don't post those little comments in ( ) in the middle of the paragraph. Very
annoying. You have something to say, do it at the beginning or end of the chapter.
A beta reader would help catch one of these mistakes. The posting mistake is your
responsibility.