rate_review Reviews

Oh my gosh....It was totally worth waiting for! *drools*....I want to be Sesshomaru's bitch.....*drool*

DAMN! WOOT WOOT! THAT WAS HELLA HOT! GO SESSHY SHOW THAT BITCH WHOS BOSS!

Nakrau: *glares* Shut up Nite!

Sesshomaru: Well, she can't but get exicted after seein you moan like a bitch in heat.

Naraku: *hisses*

NN: Man, this was....wow! Sesshy tore him up boy all up in that whipcream! He got his revenge hehehe in your face...well on your back Naraku!

Sesshomaru: *laughs*

NN: *pouts*

NN: WONDERFUL! Nice job with this!

very interesting. your writers block sucked, but you did well on this one! i liked the ending plot, that was good

This story was really great!Are you writting any other Sess/Nara fics?Please e-mail me when you update any yaoi fics you're writting?

Your fanfic was amasing! I love the surprise plott twist at the end. I thought it was great that you were able too create such irony. The tiltle of the fic really ties it all together. I would sugest that you check a few spelling errors, but other than that yopur story was amazing!

*snickers*

Good ending. XD

I really liked this story I really don't read yaoi stories but with this one I see I need to start reading them huh!!! Really good story liked the fact that Sesshomaru made Naraku his bitch his property... Will they have another encounter and if they do will Sesshomaru be in charge all the way.... Please another chapter update soon ^__^

Thanks for doing Naraku x Sesshomaru. They are my fav yaoi couple (unfortunately, not many people seems to think so). Your story is very hot and I enjoyed it very much. I had one suggestion tho. Could you please use Japanese words if and only if you know the proper meaning and usage?

(wipes drool from face and chin and picks self up from floor) well... that was hot. hell, that was more than hot. that was... fucking hot! (tries to contain thin stream of drool coming from lips) okay... so i can't stop thinking about how hot that was, i could see every moment as it happened, every hot, steamy, seductive move they made, even if only one of them completely enjoyed himself. and how hot of sesshy-chan to leave naraku hanging like that, literally. although, i must say i almost fell out of the chair when sesshy-chan pushed naraku's face to the ground... (dazed look as drool continues to flow) that was hot. that was fucking hot. it was a great story and i'm going to reread it again.

excuse me while i click the link to bitch...

ja!
~hanyou-elf

That was great!!!! lmfao! ^-^ this is definately one of my favorite stories, awsome for a smut... cause you did have purpose!