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October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really thought she was going to die lol.. Loved ur story!!!!!
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June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked it! ^_^
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HI! Oh, I loved it! So tragic, but with a happy ending. Ooh, and Whisper by Evanessence, perfect for this! I'd love to know what led to that scene, but I won'tss iss it. If you decide to write more... I'll be happy as a kitten with catnip! Or me with a cookie! It was good... can you hear the enthusasim? Sorry, I get a little high strung sometimes. Expecaially if I like something... I hope I get to read more of your work!
Levii ^_^
Levii ^_^
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May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hay,
Well I have to tell you that, that was great I was almost crying. Its great to see a softer side of Sess. I hope be reading more storys by you.
Well I have to tell you that, that was great I was almost crying. Its great to see a softer side of Sess. I hope be reading more storys by you.
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May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don't have more than one person speaking in a paragraph. It's too confusing.
Start a new paragraph for a new speaker. i had to look over it twice to keep up.
Other than that, not bad.
Start a new paragraph for a new speaker. i had to look over it twice to keep up.
Other than that, not bad.
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May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so good I started crying I really did. I hope you write more because you can write real detail it was really good!!!!!!!!!!!
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May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dude....
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May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
shock was ritten allover everyones face here (i have a reading group reading inuyasha storys here)we were all freakin off one of my friends went running into the bathroom to get nose blowers well were all happy it ended well good luck on others
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May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! evansescence is fuckin awsome! great song to do it to, too.
ive been thinkin about doin a fic to this one too you yours is definately better.
i did one for 'everybodys fool' awhile back it was ok but i coulda been better.
since ive found a fellow evansescense fan mabe we could do one to 'my last breath'? id like to hear from ya.
EVANSESCENCE FOREVER!!! LOL
ive been thinkin about doin a fic to this one too you yours is definately better.
i did one for 'everybodys fool' awhile back it was ok but i coulda been better.
since ive found a fellow evansescense fan mabe we could do one to 'my last breath'? id like to hear from ya.
EVANSESCENCE FOREVER!!! LOL