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December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT!!!! ^__^
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November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okay. this story is so hot! it's a great story that i couldn't stop reading. i am so hot and horny right now, i have no idea what i'm going to do. i'm going to have to go play with myself in the bathroom now. (caresses breasts and licks lips) see what you have done to me? it's been a little while since i've been so turned on. (bucks hips against jeans)
and the sequel... i hope to read that soon. that sounds so fucking hot!
my only issue with you, is your grammer and spelling. you made a lot of mistakes that drove me a little insane. i couldn't believe how many there were. i thought you wouldn't have so many. look, if you would like somebody to beta your story, let me know and i will be more than happy to beta your future stories and the ones already up.
ja ne!
~hanyou-elf
(elf_hanyou@yahoo.com)
and the sequel... i hope to read that soon. that sounds so fucking hot!
my only issue with you, is your grammer and spelling. you made a lot of mistakes that drove me a little insane. i couldn't believe how many there were. i thought you wouldn't have so many. look, if you would like somebody to beta your story, let me know and i will be more than happy to beta your future stories and the ones already up.
ja ne!
~hanyou-elf
(elf_hanyou@yahoo.com)
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November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It took me forever to get through the answers to the reviewers and to the five chapters! But you know what? It sure the hell was worth it! When I get into my account, I'm going to add this story to my recommended reading just so that I can ogle it everyday!
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November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
To: Anon Flamer
I agree with the author. If you hate the story that much, at least inform the author of just what you disliked. It is one of the ways authors improve their writing. Of course, I believe you know this and I wonder if you do not have some personal vindetta with the author. I would probably be upset if I were the author, but being objective, I simply see you as immature and lacking intelligence. So, you can take your ice and shove it up your ass, you little prick.
I agree with the author. If you hate the story that much, at least inform the author of just what you disliked. It is one of the ways authors improve their writing. Of course, I believe you know this and I wonder if you do not have some personal vindetta with the author. I would probably be upset if I were the author, but being objective, I simply see you as immature and lacking intelligence. So, you can take your ice and shove it up your ass, you little prick.
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November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry 'bout that, someg hag happened to my computer... As I was saying-- I hope that someone does get you you bastard. Kouga's Luver, never let bitches like this dag you down and always do what you think is best bacause yo are truly skilled and now you have 100 reviews praising your work instead of 99. Again, great job.
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November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is one of my favorites. GREAT JOB! I don't know where you got your talent to write such discriptive and wonderful lemons, especially on your first story from, but I'd sure like to know! Can't wait for your next story. They sound like they will be great! Oh, and I too have a noce comment foou'lou'll Never Know", though it is really a waste of time.
Your flame was just wrong and rude. If you didn't like it then what was the point of trying to hurt this girl's feelings? My guest is that you are a fanfiction author who is jelious because you aren't doing that good. Maybe I'm wroong, but I DO know that something is wrong with you. And in fact, I hope your stupid review stays up here for EVERYONE to see so that they can give you a pice of their mind. People like you make me mad and I hope
Your flame was just wrong and rude. If you didn't like it then what was the point of trying to hurt this girl's feelings? My guest is that you are a fanfiction author who is jelious because you aren't doing that good. Maybe I'm wroong, but I DO know that something is wrong with you. And in fact, I hope your stupid review stays up here for EVERYONE to see so that they can give you a pice of their mind. People like you make me mad and I hope
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October 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
TO: YOU'LL NEVER KNOW
This comment goes to the reviewer named "You'll Never Know" I removed your last stupid review because it was just rediculous. I couldn't even refer to it as a flame because you never gave an intelligent reason to why you didn't like the story. And now you come back to repeat your last nasty comment. You could have said something different, but chose to say the same damn thing, which gives a clue to your intelligence. You are certainly entitled to you opinion, but it would have at least been constructive if you had said what you didn't like. Was it the pairing? Was it because it was yaoi? Did you just not like the story idea? To just say the story "stinks on ice" with no reason goes beyond juvenile. Apparently, you thrive on hurting people's feelings. Have you kicked any puppies today? Stolen an elderly person's walker perhaps.
I initially ignored and deleted your last review because it wasn't worth responding to. But since you obviously felt neglected because I acknowleged ALL my other reviewers, even the TWO who gave CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISIZM, I thought I would respond since you felt so slighted that I deleted your last review.
I take comfort that out of 99 reviews in the yaoi section of Inuyasha and 29 reviews in the het section of Inuyasha, that only ONE, namely you, left just a rude, childish flame. Everyone else seemed to enjoy my fic. I guess they're all wrong and you are the only one whose correct.
MY MAJOR QUESTION TO YOU IS: YOU FLAMED ME AFTER CHAPTER FOUR, WHICH I DELETED. SO WHY ON EARTH DID YOU BOTHER TO READ CHAPTER FIVE. I FIND THAT QUITE INTERESTING. APPARENTLY, YOU'RE JUST AN ASSHOLE WHO LIKES TO FLAME AND NEEDS ATTENTION. SO GOOD LUCK TO YOU IN THE FUTURE, YOU'LL NEED IT. BECAUSE WITH AN ATTITUDE FULL OF ANGER, NEGATIVITY AND MALICE TOWARDS OTHERS, AS YOU APPARENTLY DO, YOU'LL SURELY FIND YOURSELF ASS UP IN A BACK ALLEY BECAUSE YOU'VE OPEN THAT BIG, FAT, UGLY MOUTH OF YOURS TO THE WRONG PERSON.
Feel free to respond, if youe. e. I'll just delete you over and over and over and over again. ^_~
Kogas Hentai Luver
This comment goes to the reviewer named "You'll Never Know" I removed your last stupid review because it was just rediculous. I couldn't even refer to it as a flame because you never gave an intelligent reason to why you didn't like the story. And now you come back to repeat your last nasty comment. You could have said something different, but chose to say the same damn thing, which gives a clue to your intelligence. You are certainly entitled to you opinion, but it would have at least been constructive if you had said what you didn't like. Was it the pairing? Was it because it was yaoi? Did you just not like the story idea? To just say the story "stinks on ice" with no reason goes beyond juvenile. Apparently, you thrive on hurting people's feelings. Have you kicked any puppies today? Stolen an elderly person's walker perhaps.
I initially ignored and deleted your last review because it wasn't worth responding to. But since you obviously felt neglected because I acknowleged ALL my other reviewers, even the TWO who gave CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISIZM, I thought I would respond since you felt so slighted that I deleted your last review.
I take comfort that out of 99 reviews in the yaoi section of Inuyasha and 29 reviews in the het section of Inuyasha, that only ONE, namely you, left just a rude, childish flame. Everyone else seemed to enjoy my fic. I guess they're all wrong and you are the only one whose correct.
MY MAJOR QUESTION TO YOU IS: YOU FLAMED ME AFTER CHAPTER FOUR, WHICH I DELETED. SO WHY ON EARTH DID YOU BOTHER TO READ CHAPTER FIVE. I FIND THAT QUITE INTERESTING. APPARENTLY, YOU'RE JUST AN ASSHOLE WHO LIKES TO FLAME AND NEEDS ATTENTION. SO GOOD LUCK TO YOU IN THE FUTURE, YOU'LL NEED IT. BECAUSE WITH AN ATTITUDE FULL OF ANGER, NEGATIVITY AND MALICE TOWARDS OTHERS, AS YOU APPARENTLY DO, YOU'LL SURELY FIND YOURSELF ASS UP IN A BACK ALLEY BECAUSE YOU'VE OPEN THAT BIG, FAT, UGLY MOUTH OF YOURS TO THE WRONG PERSON.
Feel free to respond, if youe. e. I'll just delete you over and over and over and over again. ^_~
Kogas Hentai Luver
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October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! So good and Delicious! GREAT JOB!
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October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahem...and again I say: This story stinks on ice!
You'll Never Know
You'll Never Know
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October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wooooowwwwwww........*drools and passes out*
Seriosly, that was REALLY go!!! !!! I loved it! Keep up the good work.
Seriosly, that was REALLY go!!! !!! I loved it! Keep up the good work.