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February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a very well written story. I loved it. I kind've pictured it during Naraku's reign of terror and somehow she was killed and Inuyasha knowing what his brother's sword is capable of took her to him. However, with the tape thing, Hey, they are youkai, maybe somehow they created a bonding strip to put things back together without it necessarily being tape, but, who cares, it was a good story.
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good job! I liked the way it captured the characters realistically and didn't make them into completely different people (like SOME fanfictions....no offense meant to those people...)
Anyway, are you going to write more chapters or is that all there is? Please tell me, and if you do end up writing more, could you e-mail it to me please?
I really did like your fic though! ^_^
Anyway, are you going to write more chapters or is that all there is? Please tell me, and if you do end up writing more, could you e-mail it to me please?
I really did like your fic though! ^_^
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg! that was soooooooooooo good! i thought sessy was going to leave kag dead. i was about to cry. keep up the good work!
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June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story really made me smile. Very well written, with an original idea! Bravo!
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June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
interessting.
I will keep looking.
I will keep looking.
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June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I understood why you did not use the word 'tape'. I agree it would have cut the flow of the story.
I also like oneshots. Sometimes, there is only so much to be said.
I also like oneshots. Sometimes, there is only so much to be said.
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May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yer just one kickass author aren't ya! Where have you been all this time!?
Very nice! You've accomplished quite a feat-keeping Sesshie-sama in character. I like how you didn't dwell on the details of which era they were in, no background. It was just emotion, and that's all that really mattered in a scenario like this. Great one-shot, bravo!
Once again, thanks for writing!
Ja ne!
~Sabichan~
Very nice! You've accomplished quite a feat-keeping Sesshie-sama in character. I like how you didn't dwell on the details of which era they were in, no background. It was just emotion, and that's all that really mattered in a scenario like this. Great one-shot, bravo!
Once again, thanks for writing!
Ja ne!
~Sabichan~
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That...That was just...Wonderful! Please tell me there might be more! I didn't take the time to fully read the A/N, so I don't know if you will write more or not, I hope you do though! * sniffles * Good chapter, very good indeed! Until next time!
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That.... I really don't know what to say. I'm so happy yet I'm so sad.
This One-Shot made my eye's get blurry.
The way you described Inuyasha's and Sesshoumaru's emotions, was
just how they act in the show. That's amazing.
Hm, but I can't help but wonder. How did Kagome die in the first place?
It could of been Naraku. Yeah, I bet that was it.
Well, if you want to write more One-Shots, go right on ahead. Anything
you write will be worth reading.
This One-Shot made my eye's get blurry.
The way you described Inuyasha's and Sesshoumaru's emotions, was
just how they act in the show. That's amazing.
Hm, but I can't help but wonder. How did Kagome die in the first place?
It could of been Naraku. Yeah, I bet that was it.
Well, if you want to write more One-Shots, go right on ahead. Anything
you write will be worth reading.
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was really wonderful. I think you really did a great job of capturing sesshoumaru's personality (or lack of) I'm impressed.