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by inuyashasgirl

person Moon Dog
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The story was good, up until Sesshoumaru started crying. I lost it there. LORD SESSHOUMARU OF THE WESTERN LANDS WILL NEVER, I REPEAT WILL NEVER CRY! THAT IS WAY TOO OCC! So the next time you decided to do a fanfiction with Sesshoumaru in it, don't make him cry, also Sesshoumaru would have known where Rin was from the start. He's a full grown dog demon, if he can't even smell his ward when she with 50 yards, then what good is he?
person Clemen
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good fic. Would be cool if you did a sequel. Until next time take care.
person anhimals
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
im glad someone out there decided to write a lil story about the cutest anime couple out there! rin and sess all the way! your story is so cute. its like cat and mouse.