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by inuyashasgirl

person victoria
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awww... this is such a nice story, so romantic! i love it!
person Tori
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved every second of this...well done.
person flowers
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I also wonder what's up with all the girl chasing.

LOL

It was nice little one-shot.
person Chrissy E E
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow this story is very good. even though sesshomaru is ooc it iss still good. also i think that u should have made this story a little more to the piont & not have had them running around or what ever. anyway good job on thie fic
person Katie
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
:o :o :o How old are you?? You that make these??-
They scare me!- I'm not really into hentai and lemons though sooo.....ya
person migele
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmm
what is it with making the girls run??

liked it

migi
person gv
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*nodds head approvingly* nice
person Patricia
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More Please.
person Bloodykisses
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn! That was kind of kinky when she ran away and he chased herit wit was great!
person flabr
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Beautiful fanfic and you are a g wri writer.I'm a huge fan of Rin and Sesshoumaru fanfics and read a lots of them and your story became one of my favorites.