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You actually updated! o.o And wow, what an update it was! Jeez, thank God you explained all the background information in full detail--if you hadn't, this chapter would've confused the hell out of me.

Even though your writing style was fantastic before, it really did improve a lot, and it made your fanfic more enjoyable to read. I swear, you should really publish your work. You'd get a lot of money for what you're doing right now.

Hey Kitten,

Yes, I am a writer, although, I've published nothing in this fandom yet. I have too many WIPs in my primary fandom to even contemplate it! I do, however, beta for a few, select writers in this fandom.

I was so very happy to see your new chapter. For a while I thought you might have abandoned this WIP. Looking forward to seeing you resolve the cliffhanger you left us with, as well as that promise of Sesshourmaru's to deal with Rin ^_^ I'm also anticipating the development of Kagome's character as she comes into her miko powers, something that might give her a bit of an edge when dealing with the deliciously dominant Inuyasha you've sketched for us. Inuyasha's currently doing what he's habitually done: taking charge and making himself solely responsible for those depending on him... it'll be interesting to see how he reacts to the true extent of Kagome's power and her use of it, making her less dependent on his help than most humans would be. She might even try to help him, no doubt putting her life in danger, which I'm sure won't go over so easily with a dominant, protective male like InuYasha. *grin*

Congrats on your recent nom. It was the first I heard of it, although, I'm really not involved in this fandom, so I'm a bit slow!

HN

I'm back. Still good and a Karran /Sess looks interesting.
Semper Fi

Wow! This story is sugoi! I ran across it after your last update and started reading it all. It's so incredibly racy. My hentai mind loves it! Keep it coming!

oki love the fic so much and i have to say i liek the detail even if it si a bit much to be saying what brand it is. dont take that last statement the rong way cause i dont mean to be offensive and i dont expect you to actualy change your writeig style just because of one persons opinion, i propbly only fel this way any way cause i live on an island where we havea realy hard time getting anything from top designers. any way i love that you are able to incorperate so much jappenese into the story, it adds alot to the story. i cant wait to read what you have planned for teh next chapter and i definately want to here more about this castel of seshomarus cause it sounds assom and please at the beginging of the next chapter if you have any pictures onthe internet pu some links so we can see them all ok :) I will be checking for updates all the time ok so get these chappters out asap cause we all wanna read them
peace
-the maui chick

you updated! how exciting!! yay!! poor miroku. i think that choosing for him to get raped was a very interesting and apt in a poetic justice sort of way.

I just love Sesshoumaru. So sexy yet so deadly.

Please post more!!!!! *is addicted to ficy*

please continue this fic rocks!

OMG this is the best I've read so far. SO what does happen in the end