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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHEN DO U PLAN ON UPDATING ITS BEEENNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN FOREVERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know this review is so long over do, but life has been crazy for me, and I haven't had the chance to sit down and read. As usual, you astound me in the huge leaps your chapters make in plot developement. The previous chapter made me think we were getting to the middle of the story, but this one makes it seem like we could finish in a couple of chapter, or continue for another 20. I'm sorry to hear about your troubles. I hope things have gotten better. Do update soon. I would love to see what happens when Inu and Kag are alone again. I have two suggestions, don't put the translations to what they say in japanese in the notes. Somehow add it to the dialogue. I feel I'm missing something because I don't understand what they are saying. Also, don't use brand names and such specific colors for the make up. It makes it harder to see. I would rather you describe the lipstick as a bright blinding pink, since I really don't know more shades than Channel twinkle. Other than that, I can't wait for the next instalment.
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please hurry up and write the next chapter i want to know what's going to happen right after kagome sitted him, and i really want to know what sesshoumaru is going to do to rin, i'm dying to know. So plz hurry up. HAYAKU! HAYAKU!
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update sooon.............we need more!
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
bomb ass story!!!!!! i loved it i was shocked that it wasnt completed!!!! update this shit asap!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love it!
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just wanted to say I love LOVE ur story and u cuz u r my fav author and I will Love u more if u updated sumthing or atleast giv us a message to tell us y ur not writing. mayb its school, or writer's block or ur family. just do sumthing PLZZ
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when da hell are u gonna up date in another friggen year???????????????????????????????????
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey this is a great story so far its awsome please please please UPDATE SOON!!!
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say is that its bakamono not bakamon, i'm not trying to insult you or anything i just wanted to tell you that. Oh and can you please hurry up and write a scene with sesshoumaru and rin i'm dying to know what his going to do to her/me. Okay? onegai, hayaku,hayaku! ja ne! rin
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
bout time u updated...brilliant story still ma fav...been waitin so long..keep writing...love ya