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talk huh? does she know about inuyasha or will she confess about miroku

Aww.. the chapter was much too short for my liking, but great art takes time if only in installments. My one complaint is that the story seems to not be flowing as well as it could be. Perhaps it is because the chapters are short or that you end every chapter on suspenseful note, but this is my one little complaint.

Keep writing though, the story is great and I look forward to the next update!

Poor Kag. That had to be traumatizing for her. I hope she doesn't give in that easily.
It would be nice to see her fight it out. She seems to have a good support system at home. Hopefully, it helps her survive this. I can't believe Inu Yasha did
THAT to her. Did Miroku go along with it?
As for Miroku and Sango, I like how there relationship is going. Can't wait to read more.

::long drawn out sigh:: kagome! USE YOUR FREAKIN BRAIN! just wear your underwear the whole day adn take them off right before! hello?? eeesh, use those neurons! and inu's a piece of shit for even coming up with that little idea.....public humliation is pointless b/c then her reputation is ruined anyways! but oh, kagome's not thinking with her brain above the belt,s o to speak, now is she? no, she is not. and what the HELL is miroku doing asking kikyo (and how the heck does she get away dressed like in school???????) to fuck him when he has a girlfriend in the very short tempered sango? oh, she's gonna kick his cheating ass when she hears about that. WHAM, y'know? update soon

Oooohhhhh naughtiness.... heh heh.. *grins* Great chappie! Can't wait til the next review! Email meh if you can.

With Much Love
Huggles
~Liz~

Ja! ^_^

This was so so good! So please update o I can read more of this.

i love your story. if you don't update soon, i'll send you to hell

Hmm..you have a naughty naughty idea going with this story...it's more than the usual "good lil' Kagome being attracted to bad boy Inuyasha" type of plot. It will be interesting to see if *real* feelings will develop between the two, given the strange way they are starting out. I'm not sure what is in store for Inu-Kag but I hope it won't be anything that would stop them from getting into a real relationship...but I'll keep reading to find that out. You have me curious! :)

Okay, so you know that weird car-horn noise that happens when Roger Rabbit's eyes bugg out in the old movie 'Who Framed Roger Rabbit'? Yeah. So I made that noise when I reread this chapter. Obviously I saw it before you reloaded it. WHAA, WITH THE TEXT MESSA! T! This guy is pretty f-ing serious about having people respect his authori-ti, ne? Ohh, no, this is every hentai babe's fantasy!!!

I am sorry....It cat cannot get over the text message! You might want to make a note at the beginning of your next chappie to make sure everyone gets that. That was wicked! WTF? How would you like to wake up to some shit like that?! "Rise and shine my hot little peice of ass...meet me under the bleachers today after school...you know, the bleachers riight in front of your boyfriend's track meet...yep,those bleachers...*wear your new work clothes!*...and be SNAPPY about it!! My erection doet apt appreciate tardiness. I'm a punctual sort of hoodlum. Wind your watch, bitch! Love Inu-chan."

I am just trippin' out over this story of yours. I've never reviewed one chapter 3x before. But hey, first time for everything, right? Anyway, I will be panting after an update. (Tammy prays feverently, "please let it be a chapter full of nothing but fabulous smut!!") But I know whatever it is you're going to cliff me next time, arn'tcha? Well, I take what n gen get... See ya soon!!

Love, Tam ^_^

Oh my goodness gracious!!! What have you gotten poor Kags into?! (As if we all wouldn't fight tooth and nail to be in her 'unfortunate position') Oh my God, this story is so FUN to read. It's just wicked! I absolutely cannot wait to see what happens next!! Is Inuyasha from some sort of crime family or something?! Whats his deal??

Okay, I am going to stop rattling off nonsense questions now and finish my review. You are doing an awesome job, the story is just effin' PHAT!!! Loovee it! I love it!! Bring on the naughty stuff- Yay!! *_~ I will CONTINUE to check for updates everyday....just like I have since you posted your first chapter!