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When you redo something, God bless you, you REDO it. Chapter three stole my breath!!! I don't want to sound like an English teacher...I avoid critiquing people because I am not a very experienced writer, and I am never really sure if what I have to say is the best advice to give...but I will give you a constructive peice of praise. The attention you gave to the character's surroundings, and the extended glimpses into the character's thoughts/feelings/ideas, took a section of your writing that was good and exciting beforehand and made it attention-TSEALING schwing fest. The exra time and introspect just really gives the story a less rushed feeling, and makes it more suspenceful. I was so pleased at the effect that the re-write had;you should NEVER rush...you have too much potential as a writer, and too much to say as a storyteller. I was just wowed...I should send you and Numisma both choclate. Have. Mercy.

(presses coke can up against face) Yeah. I just stared across the room at my blissfully slumbering boyfriend hissing curses under my breath for like ten minutes after reading that. lol. No, it would be a joke if a super-hot guy tried to blackmail me....within a few days he'd be trying to blackmail me into leaving him ALONE. "Help this Ho is a complete HEADCASE!!"

(SIGH)

Anyway, enough of my impossible dreams, what the HELL are the assassins visiting Kag's lunchtable for?!? And I just know you want to give me a clue about when I'm gonna see some action?!? (bats eyelashes and holds forth plte of chewy warm brownies) This is one tense situation. Totally, deliciously tense. Please update soon! I am freakin' dyin' to know what's gonna go down....And I SO want to know what's gonna happen under those bleachers...*evil grin* Sweet job!

Luv Ya, Tam ~_^ !!!

That's 'attention-STEALING' by the way. (Another reason I avoid critiquing people...my inability to spell at a grade-school level in my own native language....x_x

It was so cool! Please update soon.

Wow, I luv dis fic!!!!!! YU JUST HAFTA HAFTA HAFTA

Hafta hafta update!!!!!!!!!! plz plz plz!!!!!!! Yur fic puts all da otha ones to shame and yu now it! I luv there kinda story and urs is just great, no amaizing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLz plz plz won'tcha update soon!!!!!!! I would ryte more, but I dunno wat to say!!!!!!!!!! besides more dat is!!!!!!!!! I luve!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Its amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!! I lyke question marks!!!!!!!! I thynk one of my friends drugged me!!!!!!!!!!!! teheheheh great fic!

oh im luvin all of it the concept, story line, good grl goin bad lol-keep goin

Wow! Another AWESOME chapter ^_^ Thanks for reading my fanfic, but I doubt I'm going to get around to uploading my other chapters on this website..too lazy ^_^' There are 20 chapters of it on Inuyasha.net It's lmy smy second home...lol Everyone is so nice there and I get so much more reviews there then I do anywhere else.

My username..you can't type on a keyboard on Inuyasha.net..so Look for the title. lol (dont ask about the typing thing, if you see my username by the title of story..you'll understand..lol

I can't wait for your next chapter..lol I'm always online, and I get bored and check several times a day to see if you update, it's at the top of my favorites! (literally..lol)

^_^

u gotta update now i can't wait no more u have 2 everyday i think dis is da best story i've read and i've revied on all sites of fanfiction and suchi didn't think some of da stories were worthy of being reviewed 4rm me and ur da 1st so i think u should update thanx fo da story bein great update soon

OOhh... I think it's going to get hairy later on for little Kagome. I feel sorry for that Hojo though, he's so naive..lol.
Is Sango pregnant? I think you alluded to it in earlier chapters, but now I'm not sure.

Well, anyway, keep up the good work and update soon!

Gia

talk huh? does she know about inuyasha or will she confess about miroku