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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Been following this story for a while. Omoshiroi! Quite entertaining to see Inu-Yasha acting as a "bad boy" here and using blackmail for getting close to Kagome in this way :3. It shall be interesting to see what will happen next and where it will all lead... Keep up your good work and have faith in it, for so far your story has been quite a capturing one, and it's not only me it has captured, obiviously ;D :)
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*jibbers like a freaking idiot* Oh my sweet Goddess. Nipple freaking clamps. *worships you* I have never seen a fic use nipple clamps. Ever. Period. XD XD I'm so weird...
I *loved* this chapter. Mind you, its probably because I'm a dirty little hentai, but hell, at least I enjoy it. ;) The way you discribed everything was just perfect, and the flow of it was wonderful. I really liked the fact that through knowing InuYasha Kagome began to know and understand herself.
And then of couse, we have the evil little demonboy out there mentally watching this. If it was me, I'd be all "FREE PORN! WOOHOO! O.O Gods he's hot..." But nooo, eh has to be all evil abuot it. Bah. Bitchboy.
I can't wait too see more! *grins*
Much Love,
Cat
I *loved* this chapter. Mind you, its probably because I'm a dirty little hentai, but hell, at least I enjoy it. ;) The way you discribed everything was just perfect, and the flow of it was wonderful. I really liked the fact that through knowing InuYasha Kagome began to know and understand herself.
And then of couse, we have the evil little demonboy out there mentally watching this. If it was me, I'd be all "FREE PORN! WOOHOO! O.O Gods he's hot..." But nooo, eh has to be all evil abuot it. Bah. Bitchboy.
I can't wait too see more! *grins*
Much Love,
Cat
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay u made my day with this update
inu seemed more like inu this chappy and im glad
poor kagome doent know what hit her lol
yay now naraku will get in the game i like that
this fic is really really good and i cant wait for a update
inu seemed more like inu this chappy and im glad
poor kagome doent know what hit her lol
yay now naraku will get in the game i like that
this fic is really really good and i cant wait for a update
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ye gods! That was some hot, hot stuff in the lil' boys room!
I love it and want more! Greedy girl that I am.
Interesting how there's a psychic voyeur in on their fun.
You've definitely got me hooked...can't wait to see where you go with this next. And 3pm hasn't even rolled around yet...is Inu going to take it even further under the bleachers?
I love it and want more! Greedy girl that I am.
Interesting how there's a psychic voyeur in on their fun.
You've definitely got me hooked...can't wait to see where you go with this next. And 3pm hasn't even rolled around yet...is Inu going to take it even further under the bleachers?
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hot, hot, hot, hot, hot, hot... and did I mention HOT! That was a great lemon! One of the bests I've read in a LONG time. *fans self* And it has a plot behind it. I'm loving it!
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
god DAMN that was spicy and sizzling.
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*falls over and spins around on the floor* mooooooooooooore!!! i wanna read more!!! o yea... *takes out bazooka and aims at picture of goshinki* eeeeeeeheheheee u know the rest ~cencored out~ for i have such bad language u wouldn't believe it!!!
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June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damm, this is a kick ass fan fiction. I really like it! i hope you continue to freqently update! Thanks for putting somthing out there worth reading
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June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter as always! I can't wait to find out what is going to happen to Rin and Kagome! I just hope Rin's meeting is not as traumatic as Kagome's promises to be! What did she ( Kagome ) do besides trying to avoid Inuyasha, or was that all he needed to push him over the edge? The next chapter promises to be a doozy! Until next time! ^_^
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June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(sighs in complete exasperation)
This is the forth time that I have tried to review part 2 of 4...and since I have waited until two in the morning to do it, I am going to pray that it goes through this time. As usual, I was so excited to see a new chap. that I just bounced up and down the entire time I was reading it! YaY! It was like Christmas (except I never get anything this GOOD for Christmas...just fruitcake, and socks, and last year my mother sent me a Backstreet Boys tape -NOT a CD, but a TAPE, you understand- and a card that instructed me to "boogie down" to said aforementioned boy-band, which caused my roommates at the time to HOWL with laughter. My poor mother doesn't have a clue.....but tries so hard and it is always so cute.)
Yes, yes,; Tammy Queen of the Wild Tangent!! I take great pride in knowing that these pithy gems of wisdom I send are constructively molding you into a better writer. *smirk*
I know I never have any good criticism, but I really think the story is HOT! I would have never thought Inuyasha would have broken before 3pm. Why did that happen? Can I have some insight on that, please? I did not notice her doing anything to provoke him. Yaaa! He is sooo.....yeah.
And Sesshy....well. Yeah. To sum it up with one word: pimp. His Absolute Pimpness. (Sesshy tripps me out. I swear to God, the boy has straight Lithium running through his veins.) But to tell you the truth, it kinda pissed me off too... Where the Hell do they go to school!!!??? I got totally SHAFTED!! My high school was WAY lame. No Poker-faced hotties leading rich bitches around on leashes, anywhere! No hot, shifty Biker types to blackmail me into doing things that would make hookers blush, anywhere! No Dante !!! So this is what they meant when they told me that Life wasn't fair!!! Bah!! (shakes fist at the uncaring heavens) Damn IT!!!
Okay. I'm done. ^_^
So.....friend. Are we about to see some action here?? S? I? I am not complaining, the tension is uncomfortable, but it is exciting. So please know- I am not making any attempt to rush you!!! I really hate it when people are demanding and evil to authors. I would never want to come off that way- it's not me, the whole demanding and evil bit. I'm whiney and anxious. Much more agreeable.
Anyhow, please give me a heads up! I've got to know in advance so that I can tape that garbage bag over the seat of my computer chair, right? Right.
*_~ Love, Your Frighteningly Adoring Fan, Tammy
This is the forth time that I have tried to review part 2 of 4...and since I have waited until two in the morning to do it, I am going to pray that it goes through this time. As usual, I was so excited to see a new chap. that I just bounced up and down the entire time I was reading it! YaY! It was like Christmas (except I never get anything this GOOD for Christmas...just fruitcake, and socks, and last year my mother sent me a Backstreet Boys tape -NOT a CD, but a TAPE, you understand- and a card that instructed me to "boogie down" to said aforementioned boy-band, which caused my roommates at the time to HOWL with laughter. My poor mother doesn't have a clue.....but tries so hard and it is always so cute.)
Yes, yes,; Tammy Queen of the Wild Tangent!! I take great pride in knowing that these pithy gems of wisdom I send are constructively molding you into a better writer. *smirk*
I know I never have any good criticism, but I really think the story is HOT! I would have never thought Inuyasha would have broken before 3pm. Why did that happen? Can I have some insight on that, please? I did not notice her doing anything to provoke him. Yaaa! He is sooo.....yeah.
And Sesshy....well. Yeah. To sum it up with one word: pimp. His Absolute Pimpness. (Sesshy tripps me out. I swear to God, the boy has straight Lithium running through his veins.) But to tell you the truth, it kinda pissed me off too... Where the Hell do they go to school!!!??? I got totally SHAFTED!! My high school was WAY lame. No Poker-faced hotties leading rich bitches around on leashes, anywhere! No hot, shifty Biker types to blackmail me into doing things that would make hookers blush, anywhere! No Dante !!! So this is what they meant when they told me that Life wasn't fair!!! Bah!! (shakes fist at the uncaring heavens) Damn IT!!!
Okay. I'm done. ^_^
So.....friend. Are we about to see some action here?? S? I? I am not complaining, the tension is uncomfortable, but it is exciting. So please know- I am not making any attempt to rush you!!! I really hate it when people are demanding and evil to authors. I would never want to come off that way- it's not me, the whole demanding and evil bit. I'm whiney and anxious. Much more agreeable.
Anyhow, please give me a heads up! I've got to know in advance so that I can tape that garbage bag over the seat of my computer chair, right? Right.
*_~ Love, Your Frighteningly Adoring Fan, Tammy