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by badkittie

person InuYoukaiOtaku
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehe! YAY! I checked to see if you updated and there were 2 new entries! (adultfanfiction has been a pain lately) almost everytime i come on it says too many connects are made -.-' Are you having the same problem? V.V stupid problems. lol

oh, and ywelcome ome for putting up more chapters ~laziness~ -^_^-
person snowfall
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It is developing slowly and the lemon is yet to come. Wish I could be that patient! Please keep writing.
person drake220
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"my hot little bitch".................. man i wish inu would say that to me! hehe! good chapter with some emotional exploration as well as a lime! wee!
person ThatsMsDiva2U
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sango and Miroku. They truly want to be together, but Kanna is keeping them apart. I feel so sorry for the both of them. I do think InuYasha and Kagome like each other, but are afraid to admit it. I thought all the youkai hide their appearances by magic or something, but since InuYasha wears a bandanna, does that mean Sesshomaru has his tail show Tha
person Tom
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More and give us a Sess/Jennifer scene.
person nena
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
woah what a chapter. Definitely curious on how this is going to turn out.
person j0j0
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooh yu evil lit0 girl!!!! haha why'd yu have tew stop in a lemon girl? it wuz gettin good......haha yu should hav dis part where after inuyasha n kagome does thier lit0 "bizness" in da bathroom kagome finalle dumps hojo later fur sweet reasons....haha well obviously dats gonna happen but just sayin....yea...well update soon!!
person DaringRisks15
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story. Please update soon.
person Kels
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hurry up with chapter 8!!!!! I love it so far!
person colly
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My god Update soon. that story is so intense, i just want more.. the nipple clamps were a bit too muc, i would have liked it better if he pierced her nipples while making her cum... but oh well.. perhaps another time...
nice story...