rate_review Reviews

Well as far as sadomasochistic stories go, the plot isn't all too bad. But I've also read your other story, The Tribute, and found that to have more substance than the present one. The idea behind 'Bad Boy' is original as are all stories of that nature since the idea behind the theme is 'your darkest fantasy explored and exploited through pain and pleasure' but you tend to focus more on physical appearances than on the emotional nature of specifically the female characters. When I first read the story, I could not believe how many designer names that you consciously threw into the story and firmly, I think that it is pointless. There is more focus on clothing than on nature of the relationships esplly lly of the one between Inuyasha and Kagome. Many authors tend to believe that if you throw in harsh commands, rough sex, whips, chains, handcuffs, or silk ties in their stories, then it automatically is one of a sadomasochistic ideal but it's not. Most of the time, I laughed at these stories because I felt that it didn't represent what they wanted to put forth into their story and then it leaves authors to write just for the hell of it. Sadomasochism't 't ALWAYS about sex. It's about corruption, redemption, or salvation through pain and control and not necessarily through sex. Half of the time, sex is just one of the benefits for people to spice up their private lives. But like I said, the story is good but the focus needs to come away from a superficial surface of high school cliques. So keep up the work and as you continue writing, your style can blossum along the way.

Write more, please

thanks for the shout-out, and glad you liked the Coke scene. i can promise all MHH readers some inu/kag citrus during the middle of July 2003 in that story's timeline (it's May 29 in chapter 12), so be looking forward to it. prolly around chapter 18 i am guessing.

Good two chapters. Sango wants to know what's really going on. i wonder if Miroku will break and let her see. Really enjoy the story!

Woohoo, the 3pm rendevous is still on! I was half afraid that Kags would be let off the hook..and then I and the other readers would be left waiting...and waiting. Oooohhh...I wonder what Inu's gonna pull under the bleachers after that hot interlude in the boys' room?!? I just love it when he gets all alpha male on her....yummminess.

And thank *you* for the gift of 2 chapters. Miroku and Sango are quite sweet...I wonder how Miroku got mixed up in the clubs...I mean, I know he's got spiritual powers (does he in your story?) bu's 's not quite a demon. And wow, this time out Kanna wants a man - wants Miroku?! Sango can blow her away I know...well, as long as Kanna doesn't try to steal her soul that is.

I can't wait for 3pm!

That was an interesting twist. I wonder what will happen at 3...I'm dying tow. ow. Will Kagome finally dump Hojo? How will inu and kag's relationship affect san and mir? One thing. I got the impression that Kag and Inu were seniors. What grade is Sess? UPDATE SOOON PLEASE!

Interesting story, can't wait for the next update. I felt bad for Miroku and Sango breaking up. I hope they work out their issues soon. When is Inu going to tell Kagome the truth? That will definitely be an interesting chapter.

g!!! !!! that last chappy was freaking hot yayyyyyyyyyyyy
hey i was just wondering does hojo have a flash temper no
one knows about hehe sorry it just poped in there
pooor miroku the boy cant win for loseing
yayyyy i love this fic its so coooool
more more more more

OOO-MMMMMMMMMMM THIS IS SOOOOOO GOOOODDD

Oh no! Kanna wants Miroku! Poor Sango, will she just give him up w/out a fight? I doubt it! So Kag can see Inu's true form, very interesting! Inu still wants to see her at 3. Hope he doesn't make another mess in his pants! A good pair of leather pants are hard to find! Hey he said the nipple clamps were a gift for her, why did he take em back? Wont every other demon be able to smell Inu on Kag & vice versa? This is the last thing I'm gonna say then I'll shut up. What did she mean by belongs to? Don't get me wrong a part of every girl belongs to the first guy that makes her cum, but that's pretty intense considering she just hit him & he IS blackmaling her! I supose deep down Kag's just in need of a good fuck! I bet Inu's just the man to give it to her. ^_~ OK so that was more than one last thing! PS I'm all about the fashion too!
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