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July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Good chapter as always! I can't wait for the bleacher scene! * winks suggestively ^_~ * Heh heh...! I just can't believe how well this story is coming along...It keeps getting better and better with each passing chapter! I must make sure to have a bucket of cold water waiting for the next chapter.s gos going to be a doozy I can tell that right now! Until next time!
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July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story kicks ass. But...can you sort of focus on Inuyasha and Kagome a bit more? I like it when he "tortures" her, hehe. ^_~
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July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You should feel lucky, this is one of the few stories out there that I feel the need to review (Your writing is that good. ^_^; ) Your story is amazing! I wish you would update sooner...But I can wait. ^_^ Oh yeah...If you ever need a beta reader or anything, (Idea's, suggestions. etc...) Just ask! Becausem a m a writer myself...And I like to help people! (Heh...Korny..)
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOOO THIS IS SOOO GOOD AND PLEASE HURRY WITH THAT LEMON AND HOW TALL IS KANN TO LIFT MIRO UP LIKE THAT???
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am disappointed alright, but i still like the long unnecessary chapter. It's fun reading about other characters in the story. Update soon.
P.S no disappointment please ? pretty please? with cherry on the top?
PPS great story with magnificient plot. I have not read anything like this before. I'm looking forward to read furthermore chapters.
P.S no disappointment please ? pretty please? with cherry on the top?
PPS great story with magnificient plot. I have not read anything like this before. I'm looking forward to read furthermore chapters.
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HURRY AND WRITE THE GOD DAMN LEMON ALREADY!!!!! i SHALL TORTURE YOU MAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAAA ::COUGH GAG SPUTTER:: okay no more yelling for me. if ou don't hurry I shall come out of the shadows and tie you down and... and... wel I'm not sure. oh well. bye!
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Of course I like the . I. If the plot wasn't good, I wouldn't had made it to the lime. Just the kind of reader I am. I'm glad you're updating regularly. This chapter was interesting. I take it that Kagome hasn't exhibited any holy powers...I wonder if she will have any. Will Sango be able to defend herself against Kanna? I guess I will have to keep reading. So the big lemon in the bleachers is going to happen in the rain. Some how, I think that will make it work better. No Hojo, but I'm sure Kagome is going to get punished. Will she explain what happen with Miroku? I can imagine Inu Yasha's reaction. So many questions...that only means that you are doing such a good job about creating a plot to go along with this. Definitely good stuff. I'm dying for this to get in deep, when some of the secretes are out.
Nena
Nena
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
w00t! A big lemon! Yay Lemony goodness. *dances* Can't wait. That was a great chappie. Lots of details!!! Let meh know when you update! *continues danceing* :D
With Much Love
Huggles
~Liz~
With Much Love
Huggles
~Liz~
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Let me stat was great! Could you please but some fluff in the next chap please. UPdate soon. PLEASE.
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOu are a master of building suspense, drawing attention to the moment, and making me WAIT in anticipation :) Lucky for me, I'm a very patient gal when it comes to seeing my fave couple, Inu-Kag get together.
Your lime between G/K totally caught me by surprise...argh...I don't like those 2.....
Can't tell you enuff - your writing rocks. And I'm so glad that it will be a lemon and not just a lime under the bleachers at 3pm. I'm glad Kags is realizing her attraction to Inu is more than just skin deep.
Wow, Miroku certainly got the best peep show a hentai could ask for in school, eh? Too bad he almost got kidnapped by Kana, but serves him right.
;)
Your lime between G/K totally caught me by surprise...argh...I don't like those 2.....
Can't tell you enuff - your writing rocks. And I'm so glad that it will be a lemon and not just a lime under the bleachers at 3pm. I'm glad Kags is realizing her attraction to Inu is more than just skin deep.
Wow, Miroku certainly got the best peep show a hentai could ask for in school, eh? Too bad he almost got kidnapped by Kana, but serves him right.
;)