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by badkittie

person dawnindanite
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
your story is great.....but I want to know if Hojo is actually as dumb and blind-sighted as he seems? I mean, what kind of b/f would he be if he didn't know his girl was cheating on him....and if he did find out, how would he react?

continue your great work!!!!!!

person maria
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! I loved the part where Miroku fought Kanna, it shows he's not a pushover. When is Kagome going to realize that she is in a school run by demons? She seems to be very close to the truth, so it shouldn't be that much longer, should it? And is Kagome going to be a miko in this story, or just normal?
person Smittin Kittin
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chap! I won't pretend I' I'm not dissapointed about the lemon, but as an author that has done the same thing I can't complain! Who knew Kanna was such a bitch!? Now that Miroku has got Sango ass deep in trouble how will he get her out? Is it really a good idea for him to try to keep Kag away from Inu? Did you say Inu marked Kykio? What's that about? Now that Kag suspects there are demons in her school isn't she in danger? (not that getting it on w/Inu didn't put her in danger) One more question then I'll leave you alone! Does Kag have miko powers? If so why hasn't anybody noticed? Okay so that was two questions! Love this fic! Thanks for sharing! Hope your muse keeps you writing! Smooches Smittin Kittin
person jenny
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg ur story is awesome keep up the good work and pls update soon i cant wait for the next chapters
person D@RK M@GE
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know this is a dark fic, but plz be kind on him. Dont hurt Sango too badly cause we all know that he wont be getting her *cough cough* ;)
Hey I'm a loyal Miroku fan and I think he deserves a little pleasure in his life of pain. I do await the betrayal of Inuyasha by Miroku since he wants to protect Kagome and Sango, I hope that you strech it out. That should be an interesting part of the plot. I was also wondering how you were going to tie in his kazanna, if at all. In the beginning you should have just said something about him weara spa special biker's glove on his right hand that he never takes off. OR! his Honda Firebird could be named kazana lol. Well props to you and I hope I see more updates soon.
person drake220
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you are a freakin tease, you know that? i liked it (and i just knew kagome's pantyless day was going to get discovered!!!) and so i'm not too peeved at you for postponing the lemon. it sounds like it will be explosive...hehe.....looking foward to it
person Anon
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are a very good writer. Please, write more soon. Do you have a website where you post your stories up on?
person j0j0
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
still a great story so far but sowwie i got no comment hahaha well update soon!!
person Tom
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah good, I was wondering what Sess has planned for her. A vet visit perhaps....
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm really loving this fic. I put it on my Recomended Reading because I definately think this is worth reading. Please keep up the excellent work. ^_^!

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