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by badkittie

person venatus_fraus/ aka Tammy
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You TEASE!!!!!!! *smiles excitedly through frustration * Whoa!!!! I thought they were gonna get booty under the bleachers!!!! You....ahhhh!!!!! That was kinda mean of you, dawg. Always leavin' me hangin'.

I thought you loved me...I thought we was tight!


I don't know exactly how to feel about this.

*shudders* But it was HOT, I'll give you that much. OOOhhhhh, wow.! Yeah! If I had been Kagome, I would have knocked Miroku out my damn self......ruining my naughty moment in the rain with Inuyasha! Bastard! I am lovin" this!!! Seriously though, I was jubutbout to email you and start inquiring after your health and well being. I was wondering where you were. Thankfully I am not this attatched to many fanfics....MHH AND this in particular I can feel the need for an update like a vitamin deficiency or something. Addictions are sad, ne? I am sorry that you had such a rotten time this week, but you still managed to crank out this pimp ass chapter so you must be doing okay....and as for the update notificaations, I wouldn't worry about that. You know us. The prowling bunch of hentais that make up your fandom are going to be panting after an update anyway. It's not like you are gonna post and we are gonna miss it. (I would break into someone's house to check for updates if I had to....nothing shall separate this Tammy from new chapters of her favorite continuing fics.) (Nothing.)

Eeeeeeeeee!!!!!! I hope this was a long enough review.....I am goingk tok to reread the chapter now. Please update soon, or I will be forced to show up on your doorstep to beg. And you don't really want to be responsible for reducing a proud creature such as myself to a sobbing, pleading whine-bag, do you?

Love, Tam ^_^

P.s.: I still can't BELIEVE you cliffed me and withheld the booty. You Greedy little wench!!!! >_* ....Frustration.....
person drake220
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wait! did you hear that? (::clunk::) that was my mouth dropping open! how SICKLY WONDERFUL was that lemon? HOT DAMN!! oooh, all th anticipation, all the curiousity was well served adn ooooh, my god! what i would not give to have me some of that controlling inu! YEEE-HAAAW!!!! wanna ride that pony, know what I mean? ::shivers:: excuse me, i have to go read that again! LOVED IT!
person inu-fanforever
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!! That was such an awesome chapter. I like how you didn't make inuyasha's first love kikyo, it adds a new twist. The lemon was citrus-y goodness, thanks for sharing!
person Staind
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome work! I must really say that I love this story and await in anticipation for a new chapter! Hurry up!
person Noname
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey really loved that last chapter but i kinda got confuzed with the fact that Inved ved that girl named Nazuma and that she and Inu had an unborn child, i mean wasnt Kikyou the one that Inu loved?? O well just wanted to let you know.
person szmadad
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heheh...3pm FINALLY arrived!
While it didn't disappoint...it certainly left me frustrated...ended WAY too soon. Darn Miroku! :)
But to be fair, it wouldn't be as satisfying if Kagome gave in to Inu SO quickly (tho if I had the studly, most magnificent hanyou after me...I certainly would cave way too easily)....

But now this is the 2nd time that Kag has gotten pleasured by In thi think it's time for her to return the favor, ne?

And she really needs to just out and out admit to herself that she wants Inu....I mean truly, madly, deeply wants Inuyasha!

person Tom
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
When the Sess/Jen, I'm waiting.
person Hatira-Daughter_of_Water
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good job, hope ya update soon, e-mail me when u have, friends_4evr_93@hotmail.com

ja!

~Let the peacefulness of wate sti still in your walk in the life ahead...~

~Hªtﮪ-Dªüghtë®_ºf_Wªtë®~
person Hanyouluverr
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! You updated, thank you very much, it was an ...intersting chapter...Update soon!
person Assh
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I adore your wonderful fanfic. It has just enough of the show's story line and enough BDSM to keep me coming back for more. I am dying to see the next part of the story unfold.