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for bad boy

by badkittie

person Panda Panda
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wowiiieeez, whut a great chappie!!!! I would have LUVED a full lemon, but dis is great!!!!!!! I luve!!!!! DOn't even think about your lousy week, turn that frown, upside down!!!!!!! ^^ Or just chug down like a gallon of ice cream, anng wng with sugar. (BOund to keep your troubles away.) I've waited foreveer for your update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But that's okeei, you still update dis fic more Regularly then I do^^ Me must say though, one of the few fics I've read with a real plot and lots a lemons and limes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Do you realize who little ppl actually do that? I also like your other fics!!!!!!!!!!! Beautiful!!!! You are one of my fave authors, ermmm well I don't have any other, so I guess your my favourite!!!! I had dreamz about dis!!!!!!!!Arghhhhhh!!!!!!!!!! And Giant chocolate bars replaced all the characters and and they were hungry and they wanted to eat me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^ great chappie!
person InuYoukaiOtaku
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Loved the chapters, I had a bit to catch up on, I've been having a horrible time at getting internet access here, so I've been printing the chapters out so I have time later on to read them -^_^- I came back on to give you my review on KEEP WRITING!!!! You have a wonderful talant, maybe you should think about journalism in the future.
person foxy roxy
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg! u have to update, this story is so fucking hot! i love it! man, its so intense! alright then, ciao, later loca.
person chrissy
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
keep it up I really like it and can't wait to read more.
person Liz
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woo who! You updated! Yay! *dances* it was great! Finally under the bleachers! w00t! Once again great chappie! Looking forward to the next chappie... Email meh if you can when you udate. Hope to hear from ya!

With much Love
Huggles
~Liz~

Ja Ne! ^_~
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^_^ That was pretty damn interesting, and I wasn't disappointed, no siree bob! Sure wasn't! Its too bad that Miroku interrupted....The hentai! Gah! I could strangle him! And as to yahell...A lot of people's emails apparently are getting deactivated, it isn't right. I'm a bit worried that I might be next ! Gah! I just hope it doesn't happen...Anyhoo, great chapter as usual! Keep up the good work! Now to check your other story! Until next time! ^_^
person Yessi
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
when are you going to pdate dis story is gatteing wayyyyyyyyy 22222222222 goooooooooodddddddddd u gotta continue or i will die your story is just so great and wut other websites r u posting dis story i wanna no if any thanx bye
person snowfall
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I just love a good tease and look forward to the next.
Oh...it was so sad about him, Nazuna, and a baby. :-( Looking forward to seeing
what that's all about. Thanks for making it easy to read with the great grammar
and spelling.
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
your lemon was AWSOME! trust me, i don't think n e 1 should be disapointed! So, will she eventually have sex w/ inu? if she does, can u give me a hint if she'll break it off w/ hojo???
person Shadow
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE UP DATE UPDATE! Great awesome way to go! keep it up. This is getting good...are you going to write about kikyo and goshinkis date? You should. anyway keep writing