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Thanks footheother great, Kittie. Did you know I'm psychic? Here is how to get something in your document to center. Type "<" "center" ">" "whatever you want centered" "<" "/" "center" ">". Type what is between the quote marks, not the marks themselves. If you want something bold, put a "b" in place of "center". For italics "i". That's the extent of my knowledge. I always "< "<" "pre" ">" at the beginning of a document and "<" "/" "pre">" >" at the end so it will keep my margins. If ae oue out there knows how to do tabs, pleeeeeeeeze e-mail me.

Slap me if I've been stupid. Can't wait til the next chappie!

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To center: <, center, >, what you want centered, <, /, center, >

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I like how this chapter dealt with some character building and history. It will really help get the story advanced thereby leading to more action, in more ways than one maybe. Hehehe.

Come on wheres the Sess/Jen

Sorry haven't reviewed in some time but me and adultfanfiction have been having some problems. As always you leave me on the edge of my seat. Can't wait for some Sess/Rin. They happen to be my favorite couple. Your picks of the week are all great. I've read all of them. So keep up the good work
KNB

yayy u updated yayyyyyyy and a very very good chappy to ^_^
sounds like miroku will play a good part in this and thats great because i love him to
update soon grade A++++ fic

Woah . . . . . this is a really good fic. i really like how you give vivid descriptions and use vivid vocabulary and you don't repeat phrases or words often or at all. There really isn't anything to critize. *thinks really hard* o yeah maybe you could write more chapters on the other things going on in the story like M/S things. O i have a questions, are Miroku and Inuyasha friends or are they just linked by position? Some other good things are how goshinki, i dun remember if that's how to spell his name but w/e, is implicateded in the plot. And also you pay e ate attention to detail and give alot of insight as to what the characters are thinking. This is an awesome story please update soon.

Dam you and your cliffy...I hate when you leave me in suspense like t nut

oooo is is very good but more inu and kag

Yeah for the update!

Great chapter to move the story along...I mean all the sexual teasing is good, but there are so many questions that need to be answered.

And I know it's a delayed reaction -but Inuyasha was in love with NAZUNA?!?! Ok, I'm assuming you got sick of using the cliched Kik-Inu-Kag triangle...I don't blame you for that. But having Inuyasha wanting to mate Nazuna? She almost had his child?

I'm still trying to digest that idea.

Of course, I'm dying for a blindingly yellow lemon between Inu-K.she.she's definitely the 'bitch' to his 'alpha'...purrrrrrr.... ;)
But all good thing come in time, right?

And I'm really intrigued by Miroku's powers and the whole Kanna-Miroku-Sango situation. And what's gonna happen when people find out that the 'good girls' Kagome and Sango are really something more underneath it all?

Who am I kidding, your story is just an attention keeper!

:)