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by badkittie

person SaphireJade
schedule August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know that the server has been shit, but could you please give us poor, adoring fans an update? We are anxiously awaiting a Keg/Inu Lemon! Thanks so!
person Sorena
schedule August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow....hot fic. A little bit exaggerated but that doesn't matter because it's a hot fic, right? ^_^ Well written and I am looking forward to your next chapter.
person foxy roxy
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
im dying to read some lemon, but ur right, a story always needs plot. So, here i am, sulking and waiting but secretly pleased by all the chaos. I LOVE CHOAS!!! plz update soon, ciao.
person faithlesshope
schedule July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awesome! pleasdatedate soon! I wonder what Sesshomaru is going to do to Rin for her outburst. Anyways, please keep up the good work!
person Undecidedlycertain
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Great story! It's a little dirty ^-^! but it has a great plot developing! Keep it up, I cant wait to find out what's going to happen next! U.
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person Undecidedlycertain
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
P.s. When I said it was a little bit dirty, I meant I liked it! ^-^! and thank you for recommending my story, its very flattering to have good authors acknowledge your stories! Anyway, hope to see a new chapter soon! U.C.
person LiLdiva700
schedule July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please please please please pleaseaseease please please please please please please please please please please please update your story! i neeedd you to! i love your story it rocks i love it so oooooooooo much i cant live with out it! your such a good writer!
person nena
schedule July 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry it's been a while since I reveiwed, but I started a new job and things got busy. I just barely had time to update my own story today. Anyhow, I was NOT disappointed by the bleachers. You did a great job of hieghtening the situation in the boys room to a new and different level. Though, I am disappointed in Kagome's lack of common sense about track being canceled. Oh, well. I'm glad that plot is developing. Lack of plot has destroyed many good stories, though I feel like there will be plenty of subplots, which only makes the story thicker and the charecters more developed. I can't wait for Kagome and Inu's next interaction. I've been dying for the two to have normal interaction whhe whe wasn't trying to dominate her. A situation where they would be forced to talk and get to know each other. I think it's great how you have brought them together through sexual behavior, forcing them to confront their inner demons, but no relationship is based on sex alone. I'm sure you'll figure it out perfectly since you have a good hand of adding lime as a way to push the plot foward and not for the sake of having lime. Update as soon as you can.

Nena
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Good chapter! I didn't mind the cliffy at all...too much. But that was a great way to end it...I think I know who it is, but I am not going to spoil it one bit! Cause if I am wrong, then I wind up with egg on my face, anyhoo, nice chapter, can't wait for the next one! Until next tie! ^_^
person drake220
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
inu was funny! i liked his and miorku's little conversation. it was quite amusing! and sango's gonna kick kanna's ass. are you gonna bring in kanna'a alter ego from the second movie? cuz that would be really cool. how exactly did sango find out about inu/kag? thats alittle unclear.