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by badkittie

schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me you will update soon??? Wow that was wonderful!!! Such a great story, pull the reader right in, keeping us on the edge of our seats here!!! Wonderful job more please!!
person Queen
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy you updated. I wanted to ask if you could have a Kag/Inu lemon? Love the fic. Please updaten. Qn.
person Masako
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I finally caught up on this story, I just love it. This is one of my favorite Inuyasha fics and I can't wait for the sequel with Sess/Rin.

*~Masako~*
person inu-fanforever
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have been waiting for this fic to be updated for like ever. Congrats on the promotion and thanks for the great update...damn you made miroku sexxxy!
person Veil of Illusions
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just found your story and couldn't stop reading untill I was caught up. Your a great writer. The clifties are a bit annoying but I'm sure you'll make it worth the while. Please update soon.
person Ookami_572
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dammit! you got me all addicted to this story, shit! hurry and update!!!!!!!!!!
person e220e220
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you updated!!! hurray! i gotta say, miroku sounded like a gigilo but i think that was supposed to be the feel. and sango's going to put his ass in a freakin' muti-colored sling when she finds out.
person Ceaseless Cloudy Days
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you finally updated! I've been waiting for this story to be updated for what seemed like eternity, because I have no life, lol. ^_~ And that was one VERY hot lemon, by the way. You're great at writing lemons...say, when are you going to write when between Inuyasha and Kagome? Or...will you do it at all? Oh well, the fact that Inuyasha is using Kagome as a sex toy is good enough as it is. Anyway, please continue. You have a great story going on here. ^_~
person Victoria Rose
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I can see you would like some real critisism. Not just "I love it OH MY GOD" Though I sure you enjoy it. I think it is very well written. Though it could always be better. (As a writer I always feel the same way. It could be better) The writing style is all your own. Where in some cases you have a mixture or diffrent styles. I guess you could say a copy of one writers and another to combine and claim it as your own. The plot is one of a kind. Or close to it. It's a good old fashion fan fic with suspence, eroticism, and good plot that sticks. Continue the good work and I hop this review was helpful.

*-Inuyasha Fan-*
person LostArtist
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awesome story i love it! just one q tho. how does Sango know about Kagome and InuYasha?