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for Pulling Her Down

by aishiteru

person Interested Reader
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
'Sorry about my comment about the other site and I understand why you deleted it. I'm still reading and the story is still wonderful. I hope you continue with your other story too. Thanks for sharing you story-telling talent with us!
person Misao-neechan
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I already really love this story. And now that I've read the third chapter... I don't know it already seems like a good place to end it, but ... I'm definitely not adverse to reading more...

Interesting I'll give you that.

Keep up the good work.

Ja

Misao-chan
person lil_angel
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is such a sweet story and with such orignal ideas...i have never seen a story so well created...i truly love it and i wasn't bored for one minute...you sorta have this way where you are able to describe the story in such a way that you can picture it in your mind or at least me:) well i will be looking forward to the next update and i hope it is soon i don't think i can wait that long without going crazy
person Kai
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woot..'m b'm beginning to love how this story is turning out. InuYasha's so funny in this chapter. His bashfulness is getting to me. I wish I found a guy like that! *winks* Keep going with this story. Can't wait for more updates. How long do you think this story shall go on? wouldn't mind.^______________^
person ~A~
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yep, I'm still reading, and that last chapter was so cute!! Awwwww!!!! ^_^ Can't wait for you to update
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm still here and I'm going to be here until it's finished. I really like the story. I think it's interesting how you incorporated the "inu" part of Inu Yasha into Kagome's healing. It's definatly a truth and I'm surprised no one thought of it before.
person Astridstarr
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story, I love your writing style. You make this a very believable situation between Inuyasha and Kagome. I cannot wait to read more! Thanks wri writing such an original story!
person subaru
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. I cried reading it. It was so sad the way you wrote how they felt. It was so real. I hope there will be more chapters. ^_^
person lil_angel
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! A new installment and it was as good if not better than the last chapters...like i said before this story is so good i hope there is a LOT more chapters to come after this one...like 40 more...lol...naw just make as many as you see fit then i'll be fine...so keep up the good work...can't wait for the next update!
person qte_koinu
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooh, how about "exclaiming" instead? great story btw! that licking part was so sweet and romantic!

-koi