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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I read it today and I can't wait to read more of it! I have definitely never read anything with this kind of "sitting" think before, so it's very interesting. And I'm looking forward to finding out where your other story is cuz I will definitely want to read it. Keep it up! :)
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhh!!!! Sooo Happy!!! I loved it! Keep pumping in the fluff. Please, bring it!!! I take everything you dish, baby! *Rings Dentist, securing appointment for the end of the month* Cavities, here I come!!! Yay!!
On the real, I am so glad that you had some emotion and some dialouge in there...If I have one major complaint with fanfiction in general (and I hate to complain, because people work really hard and share so willingly,....writing is hard work); but it seems sometimes that for the most part all we really do is either keep them -I & K - in a completely frustrating PG situation or fling them into a wild angsty maelstorm of brainless, animal sex....not like either one is awful....but sometimes I just wonder what they would say to one another if they actually had a real conversation, ya know??? It's so awesohen hen you get to see them really interact, just TALK a little. Because sometimes It seems like all they ever do is YEARN and FUCK...sometimes seperately, sometimes together. So thank you for the story! A good fanfiction author is worth their weight in platinum.
On the real, I am so glad that you had some emotion and some dialouge in there...If I have one major complaint with fanfiction in general (and I hate to complain, because people work really hard and share so willingly,....writing is hard work); but it seems sometimes that for the most part all we really do is either keep them -I & K - in a completely frustrating PG situation or fling them into a wild angsty maelstorm of brainless, animal sex....not like either one is awful....but sometimes I just wonder what they would say to one another if they actually had a real conversation, ya know??? It's so awesohen hen you get to see them really interact, just TALK a little. Because sometimes It seems like all they ever do is YEARN and FUCK...sometimes seperately, sometimes together. So thank you for the story! A good fanfiction author is worth their weight in platinum.
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! nice 4 chapters (im a newby to the story). anyways, great job. i like the whole inner conflict between the two and the resolve they come to. nice way to get some physical contact to -- dog saliva, that's thinking, my friend *thumbs up*. all i can say now is keep up the great work, update soon and BRING ON THE LOVING!!!!
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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First BIG OUCH! Then sniffle, next came an awwwww, and now... ummm... yummy! *Looking around, pushes Kagome out of the way, sits down, and sticks out lip* MY TURN! I want licked like that!... Oops...said too much probably. Oh, well. Love your story, very indepth with feels and what's going on. Great job, can't wait to read the next chapter....
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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don't you worry, chap. 4 was definitely NOT disappointing! What else can I say, keep it up, I'm checking this site over and over again just to see if there's a new chapter from you to read! You rock! Thanks for replying to me!
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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good Chapters. I still want the website for the other story.
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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man! I love how you update every day. That's awesome.
And the chapters are long and still very descriptive.
Most of the time, authors get a little lazy when it comes to later chapters, but
you've kept the plot and the little confilct that's on the side, the same through
out the chapters. That's pretty damn good.
^.^ Keep up the good work. I love your work so much.
And the chapters are long and still very descriptive.
Most of the time, authors get a little lazy when it comes to later chapters, but
you've kept the plot and the little confilct that's on the side, the same through
out the chapters. That's pretty damn good.
^.^ Keep up the good work. I love your work so much.
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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was soooo kawaii!!
Inuyasha is so sweet. Mou, I wish I was Kagome in this chapter.
When Inuyasha and Kagome were by the tree, I immediatly
thought of the Druhid picture of Kagome and Inuyasha in the
tree wrapped in each others arms. If you don't have the site,
here it is with the picture on it:
http://druihd.staze.org/dawn.html
The picture really goes good with the ending of chapter 3
and the whole chapter of chapter 4.
Keep up the good work. I will always love your wonderfully done
work.
Inuyasha is so sweet. Mou, I wish I was Kagome in this chapter.
When Inuyasha and Kagome were by the tree, I immediatly
thought of the Druhid picture of Kagome and Inuyasha in the
tree wrapped in each others arms. If you don't have the site,
here it is with the picture on it:
http://druihd.staze.org/dawn.html
The picture really goes good with the ending of chapter 3
and the whole chapter of chapter 4.
Keep up the good work. I will always love your wonderfully done
work.
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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Thanks for redingding to my earlier review :) Well, I'm really having fun reading your updates. I think you're doing a wonderful job with both the characters' responses to the "sit incident"...although I still have hopes for a removal of the beads :) Your last chapter was so cute "I was NOT kissing you!" and I'm glad since I was getting a bit teary at tadneadness that came before. A confession of feelings...could that be in the near future? :)
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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good story! It started out being normal inu/kag confrontation...then it went to a moderate angst to a couple cute, fluffy scenes! I hope you update soon...I'd love to read more. Damn...how I'd love to have Inu lick me like that...*giggle* We can all dream, ne?? Anywho...awesome adorable story and I can't wait for an update!!
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