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for Pulling Her Down

by aishiteru

person friendlyreader
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yes very nice chapter. now next step, making out!!!! go inuyasha!! go kagome!!!!!!! GO!!!!
person Panthera
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
um.........computer not working.............I LOVE UR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!! keep writting!!!!!!!! Your one of the best authors!
person Panthera
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to add something more.....It would be a crime not to update soon....A CRIME!!! please update soon.....Love ya if u do! I just love to turn on my computer click on "Favorites" and see that u have updated!


~Panthera~
person lil_angel
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was soooo sweet....i love the way you take time with your writing instead of hurring things up cause most people who try to write this stuff usually only take a paragraph or two....i'm like in suspence right...i can't wait to see what happens next...also this is sorta off topic but i really liked the other story that you started....so i'm looking forward to updates for both...and thanks for responding to my reviews...not many writers care enough about what the reviewers think to answer them...so i would just like to say thanks for that...like i said before i'll be looking for those updates :)
person MysticInca
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* that was so romantic and sweet. The bad thing is, is while I was so enwrapped in the sugary sweetness of the moment..your A/N about a dog "licking itself" put my mind in a really BAD place. *laughs at mental image of Inu Yasha 'licking himself'*

Tee hee, sorry I often have no control over my thoughts.....

Wonderful fic though!

Mystic~me
person a dedicated reviewer
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Every once in a while, there is a story, that comes out of the woodwork, that you don't see coming, but it is still good. Yours is that story. I'm loving it, keep it up.
person ravyn evrmor
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Try Exclaim instead of exclamating. To exclaim is probably what you were shooting foreat eat story by the way. I'll be looking forward to Part 5. The whole licking scene is ust too adorable. ~_~
person Interested Reader
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Would you mind if I announced this story to my Inuyasha g? T? They would love it too.
person drake220
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic. it is so subtly sexy. the plot line is interesting and unique (i mean, who else has thought of this??) and the writing is so well done! the thoughts and emotions are great, so delicately exposed and examined. i loved the way you write!
person C_Dog
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read more. This story is very descriptive; Keep up the good work! ^_^
C_Dog