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Help, I've melted and I can't get up :) Wow...I don't know how put put words together that can convey so much tenderness and heat without being totally hentai! And yipee, they have confessed their feelings. I love Inu's humor at the end when he kids Kag about Sessh!

I'm *so* looking forward to reading more so that I can read the lemon...(now I'm being the hentai)..because you have such a way with words and creating images!

Looking forward to next chapter :)

there are reasons i think your a fabulous author adn this chapter just confirmed it.
HOT DAMN!!!!
everything about this chapter was great. the language was, as usual, wonderful. the emotions and phystical reactions were well described with nothing too trite. that part at the end when they realize things may be going too fast-OMG! KUDOS FOR SLOWING THINGS DOWN!!!!! now as my alter ego Smut Monster can testify, i'm all for a good lemon but with taking the road less chosen, well, that made all the difference. your restraint only elevated this fic into a more mature realm of writing and i, for one, applaud you for that. Not (as SmutMonster growls threateningly) that if you decide to write a lemon, i won't read it. to read a lemon that will be as well written as your will, i can safely say be a pleasure. (no pun intended, you dirty girl!!!! Bad you!! naughty naughty!) anyways, congrats a fic well done if this turns out to be the ending.thisthis isn't the end, i will be reviewing later!

Oh come on, you went all this way and no lemon? =P You should finish it with a lemon, it's the logical ending. So you should have them do it, for the sake of logic of course. ^_^

Wow, excellent. Thanks for a great story! Can't wait to see how far this goes.... ;)

Oh, WOW, Oh, WOW, Oh, WOW! This story is...INCREDIBLE!! You've taken something that most people think is funny, and but a reality check to it. You're right, IF Kagome ever did a 'face plant' like that, she would definitely get busted up. I could just see Inuyasha doing exactly that too. Not thinking first when he reacted but then get all torn up inside. Are you going to tell us why he pulled her down or why she said sit? I guess it really doesn't matter, just leave it to the imagination as to whatever.

It's really great that you have both of them thinking thoughts about the other. I think Inuyasha's a given, because he's always worried about her (well, almost always), but Kagome usually never shows a thought of remorse sitting him, except the time she did it by accident and then she only laughed it off. This shows a whole new side of her.

I just love the little banter you have between them too. Especially the "I wasn't kissing you" fumble, and where he's getting her to sit him again. Panties! HA!

I'm looking so forward to reading the next chapter... it's driving me crazy that he's 'in pause' at the moment. I love the details you give. Some might say they're long, but you nearly give steps as to everything so it's like a person's right there having it done to them. God, if you ever right a lemon...!!

Well, great, great, did I say great? job! Please, please don't stop writing.

ok I dont get on for a couple of days and all these chaps pop up???? I was like..whoa!!! then like YAY...totally fabulous chapters I soooooo love them and Im sooo glad Kagome didnt blame him and that things are ok between them as far as her not blaming him and him forgiving himself, but now...well now you have Inu getting all frisky..hehe, will it lead to anything??? did he just give her a huge hicky??? I mean he was sucking on her neck and all..lol..anyhow cant wait to read more..there is more right??? please say there is...I want to see if this goes anywhere or they decide to not complicate thier lives and move towards intimacy just yet...sigh anyhow great chapters cant wait for more much huggles and smiles Mija..:-)

Please update soon. I can hardly wait to see the next chapter, especially any added lemony goodness. ;)

very.....veeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy good story. its stories like these that keep me 'sane', please continue. also what if kagome had a scratch on her breast? and on her stomach? ttyl. ja ne!

Again, you are doing a fantastic job! I enjoyed this chapter very much, and can't wait for the next. The story flows beautifully, and you seem to leave off at just the right part leaving us waiting more. I do hope that you continue writing fan fics for us to read, after you finishing this one of course! :-) I am eagerly awaiting you next chapter. This story has earned a place in my very short list of all time favorite Inuyasha fan fics.

OMG!!! that was wonderful! More, more, please!