rate_review Reviews

That was wonderful!!! You are sooo good!!!! You know, I kinda wish you would finish it there, its perfect as it is. Sometimes, the story gets messed up if its too long. I'm guessing there are more, though, so I'm hoping the rest will be just as good.

ummm.........I think you should do a lemon. It would do good w/ this story. Well I hope there are more chapters. ^_^

I loved it just the way it was! But, I would also be happy reading a lemon addition to this.

I wish I had more to say, because sweet stories deserve better reviews, but, it was just great!

Thanks for the support. If you could e-mail the link to the first chapter of your other story I'll begin to read it. The next chapter of Redemption will be ready soon along with the other mediaminer chapters. Keep up the good work

LEMONLEMONLEMON!!! LOL He gave hera hickey!! XD
Continue ASAP!
Love the story it's good, BTW what's the sight the whole version of the story is on?
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Oooooohhhh!! YES!! DE-FIN-ATE-LY!!! A LEMON!!!!!! I'm a hentai, and proud of it ^_~

I liked this chapter just the way it is (Chapter 6) and now I can't wait for the lemon cake to come out of the oven and be served up next! ;)

I did announce your story to my Inuyasha Group and I noticed that you saw the announcement and responded. I look forward to hearing more from you on the group message page.

Loved chap. 6. I, personnaly don't think it needs any changes at all. It was great the way it was! ;)

*squeaks and falls over* *stares blindly* Oh...wow...whew. *coughs* Is it hot in here? Its hot in here. *tugs shirt* Really hot in here. Where the hell is a sexy hanyou when you need one!? ARGH. I love you as much as I hate you right now-darling, this fiction is truly wonderful. Its beautiful, sweet...you truly convay all the emotions-the fear and the overwheleming sorrow they both have, then the sweet passion...whew...passion...uhmmm...*fans face*

I seriously doubt I will be the only person asking fora lemon. I think I just might die, I mean...no lemon...*lip quivers* Honsetly, damn Kagome for speaking up! *thumps Kagome* ForGET talking, women, speak in BODY LANGUGE! The speak of loooovers....*spot lights come on and I grab a mic* LETS GET IT OOON! OWWWWW! YEAH! LETS GET IT ONNN! WHEEEEOWWW! o.o *is maimed by Yasha*

SOrry. Moment.

Even though I'm being a whiny little bitch baby over the no lemon thing, I love this. Should you decide to continue with a lemon (*begs...lots...offers pocky and Pepsi and my undieing devotion*) I'm sure there will some very pleased Yasha fans out there. And I'm sure Yasha will love you. Ehehehe...*Leers* Yaaasha's hooooorny....*points and laughs...then figures out taunting a sexually frustrated hanyou maybe isn't the greatest idea...runs. fast.* Anywho, if you don't, that was a beautiful, sweet ending.

Damn I wish I could write like you. SO sweet. So good. So hot. Yummy Yummy Yaaaasha....*drools*

Much Love,
Cat

I thought this story was very sweet and an excellent version of what could happen if Inuyasha really did pull her down with him.

I think that with the way this story is going, there doesn't really have to be a lemon part, but it wouldn't hurt it either. The whole snogging thing seems to work out just fine for this story line. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter.