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for Pulling Her Down

by aishiteru

person eternalshiva
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg I love this fic... It very sensual and romantic *sigh* and YES, a lemon is totally called for, you can't leave Inuyasha and Kagome hangning o_o The sexual tension is just waaaay too up there to NOT give a lemon xD
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm back... Sorry I didn't review chapter 5 but I didn't see it updated... *blush* But I just read it and chapter 6...

I'm liking how this is going. And you were right... Ice cubes are needed for that chapter. Hot, hot, hot. I can't wait to read more of this great fic. I'll be back again. I promise.
person kaOtic
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why thank you on the kind words on my name. :) All I can offer in return are kinder words on your latest chapter!
Yes, this last chapter was definitely a treat. I could be happy if it ended there, but there was mention of hentai if we were
patient enough so please, bring it on! Until then, I will definitely read your other fic; I know I won't be disappointed after reading your work here! Keep it coming!!
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you are hecka talented. had me on the edge of my seat reading the last two chapters. keep em comin! =]
person Firefly\'s Locket
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely! So glad I found this story. I simply adored it! HeH, the part about Sesshoumaru was extremely funny. Well, if you could perhaps tell me when this is updated? If it's not too bothersome...


~Val~



person lil_angel
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love the fluff!...this is such a good story i think you should extend it but if you dont want to then its great to stop here...this is one of the best inuyasha and kagome fic in the AFF...well thats at least what i think so i will be looking for your next update
person Mysticinca
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*melts into a puddle of wanton goo* Inu with a wicked smile....oh dear, cold shower NOW!

Yes, yes, yes! This was such a wonderful chapter, hell, this chapter was so good I can't think of an adjective to describe it! *claps hands and gives a double thumbs up* God, did I love this chapter all the emotion you wrote into each and every line of this chapter just made it so sweet and tender and juicy and ... SQUEE! I really, really like it.
It's completely up to you if you want to write a lemon. The hentai in me would really like it and the romantic thinks you would do an awesome job. Even just a touch of lime would be good.... *giggles, me so bad!*
Again, wonderful, beautiful, great chapter. And I eagerly await the next.

Mystic
person unvoicedsigner
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O_o=amber
-_-=chritein
$_$=money man
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O_o 3 !?!! shyaaaaaeee right sounds more like 6!!

-_-' dose anyone else think hickey is a weird word it allways makes me think of hockey or coffie

$_$up soo soon ples*looks up* dont mind them their crazy
person Tammy
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Should you extend the story with a lemon?? Huh? You're joking right? Don't we ply you with enough reviews? because I could send MORE reviews, if you are having doubts... you know we want a LEMON, silly rabbit. I don't care what you make them do, just keep writing it. I lurve this story!!!! Every chapter is sweeter than the last. (smiles at author with mouth full of rotten teeth) Cavity central, baby.
person Misao-neechan
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good work so far! I think the whole licking thing was a good idea and I'm sure if you do decide to do a lemon you'll make it just ood ood as the rest of your writing. This was pretty limey anyhow just a little bit further and hey there's the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

Ja

Misao