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August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I VOTE FOR A LEMON!!
You're such a good writer that I have no doubt that I'd love any lemon you write!!
You're such a good writer that I have no doubt that I'd love any lemon you write!!
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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story. It has onethe the best make-out scenes I've ever seen. Please, please update, soon! It's killing me not being able to read more. You're such a good author, keep up the good work
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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You're going to write a lemon to this right? O_O
Good story~
Good story~
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July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! Continue se! se!
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July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A lemon huh? Well, hehe by the looks of your whole licking and all that other romantic stuff, i'd love to see a lemon out of you. Your a good writer and I'd really like to see your work, hehe. Please update soon! This is a really good story.
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June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I read this over at nFiction... Just wanted to say I loved it. I normally don't post at 2 different sites but nFiction is new and not many people see it...so I just wanted to post here too.
~Ny~
~Ny~
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June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I didn't even know you wrote this chapter. I feel so bad now... I'm sorry I didn't review right away.
And I didn't forget your wonderful story. I'll still be here to give you encouragment.
I still wish I was Kagome. She got to have a prolouge makeout session with Inuyasha. And Inuyasha
was just as sweet, if not sweeter, then he's ever been to Kagome. And even after the 'kiss', Inu still
has time for humor. Heh,was was hilarious when Inuyasha said Sesshoumaru. I couldn't stop
laughing!
And for the lemon, you said yourself there was going to be one, so why not write a lemon. You've
clearly shown us with the description of the 'kiss' that the lemon is going to be damn good. So, go
do the lemon. I can't wait for it! ^^
And I didn't forget your wonderful story. I'll still be here to give you encouragment.
I still wish I was Kagome. She got to have a prolouge makeout session with Inuyasha. And Inuyasha
was just as sweet, if not sweeter, then he's ever been to Kagome. And even after the 'kiss', Inu still
has time for humor. Heh,was was hilarious when Inuyasha said Sesshoumaru. I couldn't stop
laughing!
And for the lemon, you said yourself there was going to be one, so why not write a lemon. You've
clearly shown us with the description of the 'kiss' that the lemon is going to be damn good. So, go
do the lemon. I can't wait for it! ^^
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May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
'Just checking to see if the lemon cake is finished baking yet. 'Can't wait to 'taste' it. ;)
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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I say go for the lemon! But that's just me :-)