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May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am not sure that I understand exactly where you are going with this, but I think it is a beautiful, interesting peice of writing and I am excited to see the rest and figure it out. Yay!!
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May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story. I look forward to the next installment.
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May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really like this story. It's so descriptive, although I would have thought the fall might even have broken her nose. This story is really well written and descriptive, but please continue it, don't make it just a one shot. Please update soon! =)